Item: Dusk Realm
Rating: 1
Author: Crimson_Assassin

Crimson_AssassinLv124yr

2020-12-19 09:37

The synopsis alone is full of grammar mistakes, but im really making this review to balance out the authors alt account review

Dusk Realm

Luna Carmimee

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22 Chs

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secretagent00055Lv1

I don't see any mistakes... point it out lets see

4yr

Crimson_AssassinLv12

First of all, you forgot to switch to your other account, and secondly, the synopsis is worded so terribly that i literally dont even know what it means

secretagent00055:I don't see any mistakes... point it out lets see

4yr

secretagent00055Lv1

it's just an outline.. first, you said it was grammar now you say it's the wordings? well, how are you sure it would be me.. it's not.

4yr

Crimson_AssassinLv12

Heres how i know youre the author, you have exactly 3 posts ever on this account, and all of them were you either reviewing this novel or responding to me, and wording is a part of grammar, so if you word things improperly, thats a grammar mistake

secretagent00055:it's just an outline.. first, you said it was grammar now you say it's the wordings? well, how are you sure it would be me.. it's not.

4yr

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