Review Detail of Hariate_Hawkwarth in Dryxmar Academy (GL)

I won't lie at first I thought of dropping it because of the iffy grammar, but I didn't and I'm glad I didn't cause it's pretty good. I find myself wanting more and slight disappointment/excited. I wish to see more of this, I do hope it isn't dropped cause the plot is very good and I can't wait to see the where this is going- if this isn't dropped that is.