Hello, Pepperish. I enjoyed the young woman's journey of becoming independent. It relates to what a lot of young women feel. Your character's thoughts and actions are written well. However, there are some grammar mistakes and some run-on sentences here and there. That doesn't detract from the plot line, though. Hope you will continue to write this lovely piece. Sincerely, CodeW
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