webnovel
Jacket_Josh
Jacket_JoshLv14yr
2020-12-09 06:48

Just from the first few chapters, the story sets up the main duo's dynamic, the mystery, and the horror elements pretty perfectly! Besides a few typos and grammatical errors, the story is really good and interesting so far! Can't wait to keep reading.

Let's play hide and seek

fictionweaver
4.8
35 Chs

Liked by 1 people

LIKE
empty img

No replies. Be the first!

Other Reviews
Dugzaw
DugzawLv1

I commend authors who write horror because, personally, I believe it to be the trickiest genre to write. The first chapter with Scarlet's POV already draws the reader in with its eerie yet captivating language. The imagery is strong as well. worth the read!

4yr

thelazywriter
thelazywriterLv1

Great storyline. Although I'm still at chapter 1 it already got my interest. Love the way it has a type of horror as well as some thriller. Hope to read more! You have my support[img=recommend]

4yr
Giddy_3961
Giddy_3961Lv1

The story is intriguing, filled with suspense and not as scary as imagined. The main character Scarlet has a strong personality, I wonder what's holding her back from doing the right thing. Few errors here and there, and descriptions of minimal details. Less is more in my opinion. Good job author, do update soon.

4yr
KyleSullivanJr
KyleSullivanJrLv14

Off to a mysterious creepy start and I like that! Author did good at establishing the characters, school setting and formulating the mysterious events that are going to befall everyone. Only a few things that need improvement are the missing punctuation, capitalization errors and grammer errors. Other than that, I wonder what going to happen next!

4yr
Raksha_
Raksha_Lv2

YesYesYesYesYesYesYesYesYesYesYesYesYesYesYesYesYesYesYesYesYesYesYesYesYesYesYesYesYesYesYesYesYesYesYesYesYesYesYesYesYesYesYesYesYesYesYesYesYesYesYesYesYesYesYesYesYesYesYesYes

4yr
fictionweaver
fictionweaverLv1

Author here shamelessly giving myself a 5 star rating. I know the genre says horror and thriller but it's not as scary as the genre depicts. I just couldn't find a more specific genre for it. I added a touch of Romance in it. Also I am grateful to my lovely readers for reading my work. Have fun. Join me on discord, let's have some thriller time. https://discord.gg/BFw5Mkee

4yr
Leli_Casley
Leli_CasleyLv10

[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]

4yr
Michael_Gesellchen
Michael_GesellchenLv2

Author does a nice job setting up this story. The main character is hiding something from her past and the author does a nice job building up the mystery. A few typos, but this book is off to a nice start.[img=recommend]

4yr
AC_Riya06
AC_Riya06Lv1

I love thriller and spooky stories! I like the way that there's already a scary scene at the very first chapter. I like how the author made the story thrilling with the words she used to describe the scenes.

4yr
rhandomgirl
rhandomgirlLv10

I'm kinda triggered of their past? It took them one year to remember that they murder someone? Aside from that, its an interesting plot considering that they just "murder" someone.

4yr
Related Stories

Mated to the twin Alphas

"Mira as part of the treaty negotiations with the bright moon pack, I have agreed to a marriage alliance. You, Mira Parker, will marry the Alpha's first son, Nicholas Den on the next full moon". Mira has been waiting to find her mate for years, she is the daughter of the Alpha of their pack, their pack is the weakest and most vulnerable from the other packs in America. She is not the only daughter of her parents, she has two elder sisters, but she is the last child of her parents. Mira's world turned upside down after her 18th birthday when her parents broke the shocking news to her of being arranged to marry the first son of Alpha Den, the Alpha of the strongest pack in America. Her pack needed the protection of a stronger and larger pack, so the political alliance will ensure their safety and survival. What could be worse of her being arranged to marry Nicholas Den, the ruthless, cruel, womanizer, and heartless future Alpha of the bright moon pack? A total stranger that she knew nothing about apart, from what the rumors describe him to be. Will Mira have a happy marriage like other people? or, what if it turns out, there are a lot of even worse things.

Cynthia Chris · Horror
Not enough ratings
30 Chs

The Assassin's Redemption

Jaxon Maxwell is one of the deadliest board members of the Confradia Assass. He has suffered great pain, including having to let go of the woman he loves, Maleah. Years pass, and they meet again. To Jaxon's regret, Maleah is with someone else, and his dreams of getting her back turn to dust. Fortunately, life has its own plans, and Jaxon finds his second chance at redemption. Maleah has suffered heartbreak too many times to count. She has not just lost one man she loved, but o. She's about to give up on love altogether when fate decides to interfere. A witness to a horrible murder, Maleah finds herself on the run. She doesn't get very far until she winds up in the arms of the first man to break her heart. Will Maleah and Jackson find their true happiness? Or will death take one of them before they can find their redemption?

Jeanette Rico · Horror
Not enough ratings
17 Chs

BLEEDING FLOWERS: TWO IN ONE.

Amare is beautiful black girl, a carrier of another's four hundred years old soul, Audrey! Through out all her life, it had proven difficult to be a custos but With all the hold backs, she was determined to give herself a good life! On the other hand, Alarcus is a real godlike creature in her eyes, a godlike creature to which all the other girls had tried to deliver the soul, his lover. But none of them was luck enough to finish their mission, they all died while trying. Now it was Amare turn, life or death. Their paths collided, is it a promise of bright days ahead or is it tragedy ahead? None was sure. All Alarcus knew was that his heart was an admirer of her presence. But then, can he ignore the promises he made to his lover and keep her? Can she fit in his vicious world? Can she stay? Or is it hopeless? Is this the beginning, or is it the end?

Lady Archer · Horror
Not enough ratings
13 Chs

FORTIFIED

~You have to be careful or the darkness might just breach your walls when you least expect it. Needless to say, you have to stay fortified. The word of the Lord is a strong tower, the righteous runneth to it and is safe~ A war is on. A war between the light and darkness. As an age long push and pull ensue, which side will give in, which side will surrender? The dark is scary and yet enticing. It is easy to fall off a cliff when the voice on the other side is so alluring, so sweet. √√√√√√√√√√√√ It's been eight months since Luke died in a freak accident that inevitably changed Adriel's life forever. College has started and Adriel doesn't know how she would manage without her brother. Alex, his best friend just upped and left not being able to handle his death, the consequence being, she'd had to handle it alone. Relief came in form of Jayden Crow a goergeous senior who gave her everything she needed and wanted. He was a drug and she was soon getting addicted, but wasn't that how the darkness worked? Be the sweetest thing you've ever tasted until it becomes poison in your gut. Everything was normal until he came and turned it upside down and she let him in till he became her ruin. He was the darkness and she was supposed to be the light. Truths are told, faith is renewed, wounds are healed and strength is found—but at what cost?

Taiwolilly · Horror
4.6
26 Chs
Login