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Rumana_Sualla
Rumana_SuallaLv14yr
2020-12-03 11:09

Author should update on time and give concentration to typos. The flashbacks gives an insight of what happened in the past which is helpful.

Let's play hide and seek

fictionweaver
4.8
35 Chs

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Dugzaw
DugzawLv1

I commend authors who write horror because, personally, I believe it to be the trickiest genre to write. The first chapter with Scarlet's POV already draws the reader in with its eerie yet captivating language. The imagery is strong as well. worth the read!

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thelazywriter
thelazywriterLv1

Great storyline. Although I'm still at chapter 1 it already got my interest. Love the way it has a type of horror as well as some thriller. Hope to read more! You have my support[img=recommend]

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Giddy_3961
Giddy_3961Lv1

The story is intriguing, filled with suspense and not as scary as imagined. The main character Scarlet has a strong personality, I wonder what's holding her back from doing the right thing. Few errors here and there, and descriptions of minimal details. Less is more in my opinion. Good job author, do update soon.

4yr
KyleSullivanJr
KyleSullivanJrLv14

Off to a mysterious creepy start and I like that! Author did good at establishing the characters, school setting and formulating the mysterious events that are going to befall everyone. Only a few things that need improvement are the missing punctuation, capitalization errors and grammer errors. Other than that, I wonder what going to happen next!

4yr
Raksha_
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fictionweaver
fictionweaverLv1

Author here shamelessly giving myself a 5 star rating. I know the genre says horror and thriller but it's not as scary as the genre depicts. I just couldn't find a more specific genre for it. I added a touch of Romance in it. Also I am grateful to my lovely readers for reading my work. Have fun. Join me on discord, let's have some thriller time. https://discord.gg/BFw5Mkee

4yr
Leli_Casley
Leli_CasleyLv10

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Michael_Gesellchen
Michael_GesellchenLv2

Author does a nice job setting up this story. The main character is hiding something from her past and the author does a nice job building up the mystery. A few typos, but this book is off to a nice start.[img=recommend]

4yr
AC_Riya06
AC_Riya06Lv1

I love thriller and spooky stories! I like the way that there's already a scary scene at the very first chapter. I like how the author made the story thrilling with the words she used to describe the scenes.

4yr
rhandomgirl
rhandomgirlLv10

I'm kinda triggered of their past? It took them one year to remember that they murder someone? Aside from that, its an interesting plot considering that they just "murder" someone.

4yr
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