Item: FORTIFIED
Rating: 4.8
Author: DestinyBassey_1320

DestinyBassey_1320Lv24yr

2020-12-18 20:46

Very nice story, I love the writing style and great grammar. Kudos to the author. The book is promising and packed with suspense. Although I wish I could picture more of the scene.

FORTIFIED

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TaiwolillyLv2

Thank you so much, I really appreciate this❤. I'll work on it.😊

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