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InHisName
InHisNameLv64yr
2021-02-15 04:11

Interesting premise ruined by the worst of cliches. Cliches by themselves aren't intrinsically bad, but how authors handle them makes all the difference. In this story, it goes without saying...the author handled the cliches extremely poorly. The author uses 'family tragedy' cliche (mother is murdered) in order to develop the MC's character growth. Probably to add some depth to the MC, whilst providing the MC with motivation to grow. Which is all good. However instead of slowly transforming the MC into a mature, strong protagonist the author decides to create a second-personality. This second-personality is basically the cool version of MC, whilst the base version of the MC remains weak. Not just weak in strength, but weak in mentality as well. A sad, unwelcome, development.

MHA: Bungee Gum

Chopstiksman
3.8
39 Chs

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I_liek_rainbowsss
I_liek_rainbowsssLv4

Thanks for your warning

3yr
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QueLeo
QueLeoLv10

Yo que me había interesado con la habilidad de hisoka, triste desarrollo de historia por parte del autor

3yr
Other Reviews
Chopstiksman
ChopstiksmanAuthor

Twenty chapters in and I figured it was about time to write a shameless five star review. This is my second fanfic, so there will be a few mistakes, but I try and fix everything that I can. If you don't like it, then, oh well. I'm writing this because I find the concept interesting. The MC will not be an overpowered one, but instead he will use tricks to beat his opponents. It will not be harem, or MCxMomo. I don't even know if I will do romance. That's it from me, enjoy the read. Your Shameless Author, Chopstiksman

4yr

amaturewriter
amaturewriterLv4

"bungee gum has the properties of both rubber and gum" .....................................................................................................

4yr
Miki_Marlo75
Miki_Marlo75Lv4

the story shits the shit of the split personality just because of a trauma from the death of his mother who is murdered talks about being mature all the first chapters but something happens and the MC changes like this

4yr
DaoistyQNGiX
DaoistyQNGiXLv14

Rating may change but idk.... the mc mom dies out of nowhere because she is murdered idk felt forced.... next the mc develops some kind of second personality or something related to that hecause of the incident.... he is a reincarnated person idk how this story went from promising to this in two chapters but it did

4yr
Ayer52
Ayer52Lv12

I honestly liked this novel at first but then too much drama happened. His mom gets brutally murdered, then he mutilates some kid who bullies him and then he has a split personality. It’s all too much and over the top. It started pretty good but then the author just decides to pile on drama as a way to develop the MCs character. Some people might enjoy this but it’s just not for me.

4yr
Izanmi
IzanmiLv4

Reveal spoiler

4yr
kkkkkkkkfn
kkkkkkkkfnLv3

The author destroyed the story by forcing a tragedy to happen and making this shit plot of having two personality. Like really? The mc parents are rich his father have connection with so many people but he ne thought in hiring bodyguards? Living in a secure community? See? With this you can see the author forced the tragedy to happen without even thinking about the details. In summary a story with good beginning and promising future destroyed by author limited imagination and lacking of care. It best if you simple drop because I can already see you making the story to trash level before chapter 50

4yr
MalKenDov
MalKenDovLv13

i promote this cause i like the idea and want to see where it goes ......... ...................................................... .............................

4yr
MoldyGuacamole
MoldyGuacamoleLv4

Awesome premise; awful execution. It was going so well, until the author decide to go for the murdered parent and split personality tropes. Dont let the tags fool you, the mc is neither balanced nor cunning.

3yr
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