Review Detail of jecht0inferno in Forging The Path To Godliness

the story has potential, BUT the author didn't put any thought in it. system? too simplistic. story? one way line of copy/paste plot. character development? nonexistent or jumpy power level? just put a name and it's okay? place? structure wise, no good. distance, no good. in short; is the author a newbie? if not, take some vacation and improve it after some good rest. sincerely, a simple reader.