Review Detail of Momengah1 in Forging The Path To Godliness

The idea behind the story is quite intersting. If done properly I think this could be a great story. However the story pace is rushed and consequently everything is glossed over. There's barely any development and details in the characters, the world and the story in general. It's like watching a movie in fast forward. Good on the author for giving it a try, but this is a no for me .