The greatest parts of blacksmithing/crafting stories is watching the character struggle, learn, gain experience, and finally succeeding in something amazing. It’s satisfying to watch that process of growth. This story doesn’t have that. He failed 1000 times to activate his system, then after it was activated, he didn’t struggle at all. Every sword was pretty much a success, with little info on what was going on. It seems as if everything is working out fine for him with little experience. Not that great of a read, and rather dull with basic drama.
King Demigod
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