shamless own review. This book is about a fantasy world that a normal man was sent to after he died. he will not become over powerd he will not have a harem he will not kill the demonlord or a big bad evil guy this will be a story of. if a normal person with normal feeling with normal ambitions had a second chance
codenick
Liked it!
LIKEthanks for the review. I appreciate the feed back I'm trying my best all I can say is im trying my best and trying to get a editor so I can keep releasing quickly as well as upgrading the quality thanks for helping me and thanks for reading
Reaper_X_7998:its good but you need better spelling while I was reading it noticed a few spelling errors it was mostly dose, its spelled does not dose just fyi the story is good too I can see this getting a good ranking if you can fix the spelling errors and some grammatical mistakes
codenick:thanks for the review. I appreciate the feed back I'm trying my best all I can say is im trying my best and trying to get a editor so I can keep releasing quickly as well as upgrading the quality thanks for helping me and thanks for reading