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Review Detail of GodofKiyotaka in Transmigration in Against the Gods (AU)

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GodofKiyotaka
GodofKiyotakaLv13yrGodofKiyotaka

Here's my review based on my opinion. At the start of the story , it's pretty okay..but the character development seems lacking as the chapters go by. I don't know what to say because English is not my main forte.  The protagonist in this story is like any other cultivation novel, not like something "transmigrated person" that we can relate to. I mean his personality was like in Xianxia novels that doesn't have common sense of people in modern. Yes he has the knowledge of the modern world but lacks common norms. I'm saying in my OPINION that the novel downfall started in the tournament. I'm not criticizing the romance, but the MC is pretty biased and always looking for flaws in beautiful girls. like he is kinda gentleman but at the same time it kinda annoys me.  Thanks for writing, I appreciate your hard work I just want to share my very honest opinion.

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Transmigration in Against the Gods (AU)

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TheDaoOfBullshit
TheDaoOfBullshitLv3TheDaoOfBullshit

The Romance is pretty forced and this is an ATG fanfic where harem happens and the author is like he made scum che have a harem and im disappointed in that

Inferno_Vor
Inferno_VorLv13Inferno_Vor

I honestly don't get what you mean here. Like there are many things you could take into account when saying what you did and even when you say it's not cause of romance most of the negative reviews on this novel popped up when the pairing happened so I honestly don't believe that it's cause of something else. The personality complaint makes no sense cause MC is mostly reasonable, or as reasonable as you can be in a xianxia world. It's impossible to act like a modern man in a xianxia world unless you want to die or stick out, at least until you overpower everyone. About looking for flaws in beauties makes no sense again since Yufeng is a beauty in her own right. His opinions on the others are reasonable, otherwise just liking them on first impression would be infatuation or a simple crush, which him not having and having a more stable outlook on things is expected due to his past life age and experiences. So no matter what you say it just seems you being pissed at pairing cause I can't see how you described what happened in the novel as reasonable.

Nadare17
Nadare17Lv4Nadare17

omg.... thank you for telling this. now I must see the exit

TheDaoOfBullshit:The Romance is pretty forced and this is an ATG fanfic where harem happens and the author is like he made scum che have a harem and im disappointed in that