Throughout three chapters so far, I can say that I am intrigued. The plot is looking solid so far. The take of our protagonist taking a cruel challenge to begin his quest for a grand change works very well on how the author plans to build the world background. It is clear from the few chapters that the author has a knack for creating scenarios with details excellent details. From the gruelling battles and an environment where only despair can be mostly seen, it has been conveyed clearly through the way it was written. Although what made the most impression was the characters. The behaviour and characteristic of the first few characters that have been introduced are already cemented in such a short time. This might also be due to the detailed writing of the author. Yet the detailed writing may be too much in some parts of the story especially in dialogues between the characters. It is fine to explain how the characters act during a conversation, but sometimes it is better to have none. Another small thing I noticed is the use of 'tension'. In this story, it is supposed to be like a power conduit for the characters. But because 'tension' has not yet been properly explained except in the synopsis, sometimes there are parts where I got confused on how it was used in the paragraph because the literal meaning of 'tension' also works. It might be better to capitalize 'Tension' when it concerns the mysterious force. Besides that, there maybe be some grammatical and punctuation mistakes which can be improved later on. The usage of (' ') and (" ") might get confusing at first, but you'll get used to it sooner or later. OVERALL: A promising story with promising characters. P.S. I feel like Tragedy will be good in this even though I'm not really a fan of it.

Well a rarity comes ones in a while and this is one of those rare gems that I would recommend. I couldn't leave much words etched in this review, However you will not see a better start to a Novel here in webnovel unlike what the author had done. Short, just enough to know and yearn for more, take my words for it guys read it. I know reviews are often looked past, so putting up spoilers would only make thia review shunned and unread. The only problem I have is the updating stability, which would be fixed of that I'm sure? Or maybe not? I hope It does cause I'm taking inspiration from chapter 3... don't hate me author!

I'm writing this for the EXP but I enjoy this story. I think you should read it, Need more words. Need even more words. More words than that. And were good.

Right when I started, I found this novel was quite nice, very meticulously written and vocab feels like a genius at work. Will enjoy reading the rest.

It has been a while since I read something in first person but the author has made the story flow in such an effortless way that I can't help but want more. The emotions that the author cultivates through the characters are overwhelming and make the book a treat worth savouring.

Unique story and characters, had me wanting more!! Excited to see where this goes. Author really draws you in with his distinct detailed explanation of the scene. Really helpful with picturing what is going on in your head!

I guess this is a dark-fantasy novel because your book cover is hinting at a creepy 💀. Hmm, much better if you manage to publish and daily and after that edit it.

It is a great novel and it has great potential too. Just continue to improve it, more so the stability of updates. All in all, it is a pretty good novel. Good Job:)

Mind blowing writing style, no doubt. Moreover, the creativity is excellent and the plot is interesting. The only con the work has is that there are just too few chapters. Not to say, the time between each release is just too long. As long as it can be fixed, this work will truly be a lit.