Review Detail of Vitor_Gamer_Br in Insanity Of A Reverend Reader
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details are lacking, in the interaction of the characters, in their interaction with the world, and the personality of the protagonist is boring and irritating, he lacks charisma
Insanity Of A Reverend Reader
Nike13K
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LordInsanity:He lacks traits I'd expect from someone that has read RI before being isekai'd
He hasn't read it tho. The first 270 chapters is nothing compared to the later ones. Kai Nem has received minimal influence. Sure, the first chapters are still amazing, but the shit that happens afterwards is too amazing in comparison.
LordInsanity:He lacks traits I'd expect from someone that has read RI before being isekai'd
Just a FYI, mc was a teenager before reincarnating. He is edgy, annoying and temperamental. It is his character. Giving him such traits might be a bit annoying to the reader, but I can't shove character development into 1 chapter and just overturn his very existence. Character development is gradual. Example 1. He swallowed his pride and let go of his pettiness and hate boner in the blood battle competition to make sure his plans went smoothly. People don't change within days, it is gradual and Kai Nem has developed. He isn't like Fang Yuan and isn't supposed to. Such dramatic character requires a lot of time and experience dealing with the Gu world, something Kai Nem doesn't have.
OK, if your character improves, I'll give you a better review, but you also have to improve your writing, put more details in the descriptions etc ...
Nike13K:Just a FYI, mc was a teenager before reincarnating. He is edgy, annoying and temperamental. It is his character. Giving him such traits might be a bit annoying to the reader, but I can't shove character development into 1 chapter and just overturn his very existence. Character development is gradual. Example 1. He swallowed his pride and let go of his pettiness and hate boner in the blood battle competition to make sure his plans went smoothly. People don't change within days, it is gradual and Kai Nem has developed. He isn't like Fang Yuan and isn't supposed to. Such dramatic character requires a lot of time and experience dealing with the Gu world, something Kai Nem doesn't have.
Nike13K:Just a FYI, mc was a teenager before reincarnating. He is edgy, annoying and temperamental. It is his character. Giving him such traits might be a bit annoying to the reader, but I can't shove character development into 1 chapter and just overturn his very existence. Character development is gradual. Example 1. He swallowed his pride and let go of his pettiness and hate boner in the blood battle competition to make sure his plans went smoothly. People don't change within days, it is gradual and Kai Nem has developed. He isn't like Fang Yuan and isn't supposed to. Such dramatic character requires a lot of time and experience dealing with the Gu world, something Kai Nem doesn't have.
Vitor_Gamer_Br:you constantly break the immersion of your own history and this is extremely irritating
you constantly break the fourth wall and with that all the immersion that the reader has with the story goes away.
Nike13K:I don't understand what you mean?
This story is in the form of a broadcast. Kai Nem literally said he is recording this shit himself and I have referenced him not being able to record his thoughts multiple times throughout the story. The **** am I supposed to do? Not breaking the fourth wall would mean bad continuity.
Vitor_Gamer_Br:you constantly break the fourth wall and with that all the immersion that the reader has with the story goes away.