The flow of your story and settings were captivating. The use of descriptive words and the transition plot were greatly depicted. Especially the emotional state of your characters I honestly admired how you can put it into words. And the way how you start the story with a gloomy atmosphere and depressing state of your MC can hook readers effectively. Especially those that are like me who's into sad and tragic romance. I'm not a fan of horror stories but your story caught my interest alright. Here's hoping to read more awesome and thrilling substance, you did a great job author! keep up the good work.
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