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niharikabholLv104yr
2020-11-26 22:24

I love the way the FL and ML characters are developed in the story. Gives a good insight about their characteristics. Although I have read only a few chapters, I can tell that the story is quite warm. . . . . . A bit of improvement can be done in the writing style and grammar. But otherwise it seems super promising. More power to you!

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