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Yes, this is a good book. Not so common plot,but I have read one or two plots like this. I expect there are a lot of twists here. keep it up! I just think you might want to work on the narration part. sometimes, you are using present tense, which is supposed to be past in past tense since you are using it most of the times. But I really like the plot, all in all. 💙

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Was it Suicide?

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Thank a lot! I will surely work on my narration, thanks for telling that!