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Samboy
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2021-06-23 23:36

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π•€π•Ÿπ•₯𝕣𝕠 Hello author-nim! I am here with a seriously thought out review, as I believe it is given time I review the story. This story is probably one of my favorites. Although this story is one of my favorites, I will not just give a brainless review with 5-stars. This review consists of my real views and tips/advice on how this story could be improved for future readers reading experiences. π•Žπ•£π•šπ•₯π•šπ•Ÿπ•˜ β„šπ•¦π•’π•π•šπ•₯π•ͺ In my opinion the author's grammar, punctuation and word forming could be greatly improved. A lot of sentences are either missing words or worded terribly. Sometimes irrelevant sentences are put together instead of being seperated with a full stop. Originally I was going to give a 3-star for writing quality. However, because it wasn't completely unreadable, I gave it a 4-star. π•Šπ•₯𝕠𝕣π•ͺ π”»π•–π•§π•–π•π• π•‘π•žπ•–π•Ÿπ•₯ For story development, I decided to rate it a 5-star. So far, from what I have read. The story development is good, it isn't too fast paced and it explains quite a few things. It shows the main character's process of returning to the same power of his previous life. The storyline/plot is very interesting and entertaining. I thoroughly enjoyed read this story so far. ℂ𝕙𝕒𝕣𝕒𝕔π•₯𝕖𝕣 π”»π•–π•€π•šπ•˜π•Ÿ Character design, 2-star! Why? 1. There was almost no introduction to the main character at the beginning of the story. 2. Barely any explanation was made about his past life and history/background. 3. It was also unclear whether his name was the same as his current life in the past (I had to clarify with the author on this topic). π•Œπ•‘π••π•’π•₯π•šπ•Ÿπ•˜ π•Šπ•₯π•’π•“π•šπ•π•šπ•₯π•ͺ I give the updating stability a 5-star. The author updates quite often. Most of the time 2 chapters are uploaded in one update. I am very satisfied with the upload times and chapters. π•Žπ• π•£π•π•• π”Ήπ•’π•”π•œπ•˜π•£π• π•¦π•Ÿπ•• World background is fairly decent. Although not much is explained in the beginning. I let it slide as the world background is later explained in more detail. 4-stars for world background. 𝕆𝕦π•₯𝕣𝕠 Hopefully author-nim doesn't find this review too harsh...(β€’ β–½ β€’;) 𝕋𝕠π•₯𝕒𝕝 β„π•–π•§π•šπ•–π•¨ 4-stars

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