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Review Detail of AbsoluteVoid in Overcoming all Odds

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AbsoluteVoid
AbsoluteVoidLv23yrAbsoluteVoid

The story's ok for now. Just please do not use the CYOA/skills to manipulate love interests. It's just boring for story development and leaves a bad taste in people's mouths.

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Overcoming all Odds

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JosePascua
JosePascuaLv4JosePascua

And what did you expect from a fic that has tags like: '#Smut' '#NSFW' '#Harem' '# R-18' '#Lewd' ??? It literally tells you that it's a horny fic from a horny author for horny readers. For horny people the logic is non-existent, to the point where you could gain OP powers just by cumming on a virgin etc.

AbsoluteVoid
AbsoluteVoidLv2AbsoluteVoid

I didn't say anything about the story being bland and only smut. I just said for the author to consider changing things up for the story. I think you posted this on the wrong review.