Review Detail of molovori in rewritten

Not a fan of this one. Having read only 2 chapters, I knew it was bad. The author keeps mixing up He and She. With the bad grammar and the confusing POV change, it is barely readable. There is just too many mistakes and the Author doesn't fix them. I get that English is not Author's native language, but at least try and fix it. There are commenters telling you what to fix. Cool powers for a Marvel fan-fic, but it's ruined by Harem and the awful Character Design. Betty Ross (30-45 yrs old), Hulk's love interest, blushes instantly after seeing MC (a teenager) during a fight between Hulk and the Abomination where people should be panicking. This part alone shows me that the rest of the story will be full of cringe and Author's lust fantasies. (It ain't romance if it's more than one person, that shit is lust.) (I hate harem but I still gave this a try.) If you're into harem and low iq stories such as this then cool. You do you.