Review Detail of Jo_J in Devil's Cold-Hearted Love

I would not like to delve into the content, nor do I want to judge it. I am not a fan of this type of literature, but I will try to be objective. I will evaluate the whole from the point of view of structure, etc. The cover page is original (it's a part of success ;) ) The storyline keeps well the reader’s attention, characters are expressive, dialogues are engaging, descriptions interesting. You don't struggle, like most of us (non-English speaking) with tenses, style or grammar... so it's a pleasure to read. I just don't like the staff I already mentioned in comments. I wish you an inspiration and a lot of great ideas! All the best with the contest! I hope I helped a little.