Review Detail of Ouroboros001 in My CEO Harem Cultivation System

RachelRuth:Ah, thank you for the review! And my sincere apologies for the time you've wasted reading this book when you were looking for something else :) Happy reading in other books! I'll pin your review to help other readers! For those in the future who stumbles upon this review: I'll take Ouroboros001's review to recalibrate the appropriate tags and warnings to ensure that you know what you're getting into. While initially seeming harem-oriented, there's some attempt (keyword: attempt) given in being a meta-commentary on the usual tropes of harem, whichalso has contents of harem trope subversion and uncomfortable topics, that can be either taken as a somber note of realism or plain drama. Especially the incidents surrounding that of the brother. I've expressed some note in the auxiliary chapters about the fact that NOT every living, breathing woman he interacts with becomes part of the harem. And there is a natural inclination for dislike, or hate. You come here expecting a suave CEO banging women left and right, but he doesn't. There's no immediate ***, a lot of attention is given to characters which may be deemed irrelevant to the plot of collecting and obtaining women for personal enjoyment. There's the CEO coming in terms to the situation he's forced in to collect girls and cultivate for the etertainment of the heavens (readers and gods), which may be a wet dream for anybody else, or something you'd find effectively stomps on your free will. My Author Notes can be deemed irrelevant and unnecessary fluff. Yes, this is something LONG already? xD Needless to say, this is an attempt of an explanation... but everyone is free to NOT read this story and look elsewhere ^_^ Or you can also write your own if you really want a CEO Harem! Cheers!

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RachelRuth:Ah, thank you for the review! And my sincere apologies for the time you've wasted reading this book when you were looking for something else :) Happy reading in other books! I'll pin your review to help other readers! For those in the future who stumbles upon this review: I'll take Ouroboros001's review to recalibrate the appropriate tags and warnings to ensure that you know what you're getting into. While initially seeming harem-oriented, there's some attempt (keyword: attempt) given in being a meta-commentary on the usual tropes of harem, whichalso has contents of harem trope subversion and uncomfortable topics, that can be either taken as a somber note of realism or plain drama. Especially the incidents surrounding that of the brother. I've expressed some note in the auxiliary chapters about the fact that NOT every living, breathing woman he interacts with becomes part of the harem. And there is a natural inclination for dislike, or hate. You come here expecting a suave CEO banging women left and right, but he doesn't. There's no immediate ***, a lot of attention is given to characters which may be deemed irrelevant to the plot of collecting and obtaining women for personal enjoyment. There's the CEO coming in terms to the situation he's forced in to collect girls and cultivate for the etertainment of the heavens (readers and gods), which may be a wet dream for anybody else, or something you'd find effectively stomps on your free will. My Author Notes can be deemed irrelevant and unnecessary fluff. Yes, this is something LONG already? xD Needless to say, this is an attempt of an explanation... but everyone is free to NOT read this story and look elsewhere ^_^ Or you can also write your own if you really want a CEO Harem! Cheers!

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ThatsClassified:in not tryna hate but it's kinda misleading by the tags a little bit

RachelRuth:Which one should I remove, ThatsClassified? 🤔 I added the Slice of Life to make the slow paced understandable. Did I remove the R-18 tag, I think I did that. The aim of the System is to form a Harem so I still included the tag lol. I could remove Comedy since I'm not funny 🤣

Creationist:Remove the Harem tag bro, add an NTR tag as well, lots of people arent into their MCs getting cucked

RachelRuth:Ah, thank you for the review! And my sincere apologies for the time you've wasted reading this book when you were looking for something else :) Happy reading in other books! I'll pin your review to help other readers! For those in the future who stumbles upon this review: I'll take Ouroboros001's review to recalibrate the appropriate tags and warnings to ensure that you know what you're getting into. While initially seeming harem-oriented, there's some attempt (keyword: attempt) given in being a meta-commentary on the usual tropes of harem, whichalso has contents of harem trope subversion and uncomfortable topics, that can be either taken as a somber note of realism or plain drama. Especially the incidents surrounding that of the brother. I've expressed some note in the auxiliary chapters about the fact that NOT every living, breathing woman he interacts with becomes part of the harem. And there is a natural inclination for dislike, or hate. You come here expecting a suave CEO banging women left and right, but he doesn't. There's no immediate ***, a lot of attention is given to characters which may be deemed irrelevant to the plot of collecting and obtaining women for personal enjoyment. There's the CEO coming in terms to the situation he's forced in to collect girls and cultivate for the etertainment of the heavens (readers and gods), which may be a wet dream for anybody else, or something you'd find effectively stomps on your free will. My Author Notes can be deemed irrelevant and unnecessary fluff. Yes, this is something LONG already? xD Needless to say, this is an attempt of an explanation... but everyone is free to NOT read this story and look elsewhere ^_^ Or you can also write your own if you really want a CEO Harem! Cheers!

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BlaccLotus:This is why you shouldn't believe in male lead romance themed novels written by women. Mostly disappointing. Some of them love beta cuck.

RachelRuth:No more Harem Tag! As for the classification of NTR, the MC doesn't actually care about those women as much as the readers to classify as NTR O.o Prospective Harem Member 2 (?) - A woman he barely met in a day and who made it clear that she didn't like him. She can come over to his house wearing whatever she likes because it's her body xD She came to his house only to deliver tea her matriarch insisted and not out of her own liking Woman with the child - Someone he only slept with when he was drunk at the party. The woman was a friend of his brother and not his, and the woman was already sleeping around with different people. He and his brother didn't sleep with her on the same night either. She's the person who likes to casually sleep around and got a child as a result I added these situations to showcase that NOT every living breathing woman in the story is automatically a love interest 🤔 A person will get into the wrong relationships and meet the wrong people at the wrong time. There might be occasions where the MC makes mistakes and he has to take consequence for his action (Ex: Even though he slept with her while drunk and a child is the result. Does he step up as a father while continuing on with his Harem Missions?) If these situations count as NTR, then they're highly misinterpreted. Maybe I'm just writing a too idealistic story where a man understands that this is not a wish fulfillment story to gratify the cravings of getting women in his harem just for the sake of it. It's a story where a protagonist is forced to get a Harem by the System and Heavens. While there might be some happy scenes and even R-18 moments, there's still an undertone of reality in it, Creationist that many will dislike. If people don't like it, then they're free to leave and read other stories here to feel comfortable. It got a bit too lengthy LOL

Laduvin:You're right. I have noticed how some female writers do that, for them NTR doesn't seem to have the same reaction but usually, I catch that early and drop it. At first, I was drawn in by the name, description, and tags. It was selling something different than advertised. To be honest, I don't look to see if a writer is male or not most of the time. There are some female writers for harem that I read all the time that are pretty good. Tamryn Tamer, Sarah Hawke, and M.H. Johnson are all pretty good with none of that NTR crap, but not all those have R-18. Even the good ones have that sometimes though and you have to check the reviews. Eden Redd is normally really good with no NTR, but she did so it once. I dodged that series. Those others I mentioned? Not even used as a threat is there NTR. Tamryn and her husband write together and their work is the best quality over many others. I digress. This was one was just awful though. I should've dropped it right when I saw the first signs, but I mistakenly thought it was unintentional because of what drew me in, and by the time I realized this wasn't the case, there wasn't much left of the free chapters anyway. And also It's kind of LAUGHABLE that the author claimed to had removed the harem tag where the title is literally all about HAREM. Completely misleading premise. It's really okay that she wanted to write realistic or slice of life but the problem is her writing style. The way she highlights cuckold story and characters is nasty. Well, not surprised though as she seemed into that kind of story. She could write something realistic without highlighting the cuckold part but NO, this is why I don't believe in male lead romance written by women, especially those who have weird fetish.

Mr_Imagination:Yup, they have that strange cuckold fetish. You can almost see it in every josei stories. The FMCs are like glorified sluts LMAO, being fcked buy 5 different men. and those men doesn't have complaints. You guys know what? Men won't complain about gangbang or orgy because they know that there isn't anything involved except pleasure. You see my point? Also, never in history would a proper and normal man like to get cucked, especially if he is excellent or above others, regarding social status.

RachelRuth:Which one should I remove, ThatsClassified? 🤔 I added the Slice of Life to make the slow paced understandable. Did I remove the R-18 tag, I think I did that. The aim of the System is to form a Harem so I still included the tag lol. I could remove Comedy since I'm not funny 🤣

BlaccLotus:Completely misleading premise. She wants to write something a bit realistic/slice of life but it's poorly executed resulting cuckold story. Let's take a moment of silence for fellow real dudes who are expecting a real gem only to get cuckold story with beta mc LMAO. Exceedingly disappointed by misleading premise. I would have a bit of respect if she adds a cuckold tag instead LoL.

ThatsClassified:looks like you removed the harem tag.... pretty useless if you're gonna keep the title😩. Ayo wtf? The title implies it's a harem but then the tags say it ain't. Also please all the NTR tag cuz it's clearly ntr. Again, I'm not tryna hate or be rude(to you, I dislike the story") just some, criticism "🤪"

RachelRuth:Or I could change the title but that's a long process with Webnovel 🤣 It's a difference of definitions I suppose as pointed out. Whatever happened didn't trigger my NTR alert. Unfortunately, it was a risky endeavor doing this and I guess I learned that I'm really not ready to make harem books, however I continue on lol. It's worse to drop a book xD 1. Will change title when I find a better one but that's a LONG process with Webnovel especially with new books flooding for Spirity. So you're stuck with this Thank you for the lively conversation that I hope cultured men will read to AVOID the hell out of it in mean time! I won't use the cuckload tag because a) Girl was someone he barely met and already acknowledged her distaste 2. the thing with his brother and the woman with the child was me going overboard on the CEO-y female trope. Acknowledged. It didn't play well. Cuckload - man whose romantic partner is sexually unfaithful, often regarded as an object of derision. Was he in a relationship with the woman? No. It's not cuckloading then. There stands my logic. BUT of course arguing with the harem logic that every woman he meets is a harem member is a tiring battle and is a long-hold fantasy xD is of course ridiculous to argue because we all have our own tastes. But yes 🤔 Will change so thank you for the healthy discussion here!

RachelRuth:Or I could change the title but that's a long process with Webnovel 🤣 It's a difference of definitions I suppose as pointed out. Whatever happened didn't trigger my NTR alert. Unfortunately, it was a risky endeavor doing this and I guess I learned that I'm really not ready to make harem books, however I continue on lol. It's worse to drop a book xD 1. Will change title when I find a better one but that's a LONG process with Webnovel especially with new books flooding for Spirity. So you're stuck with this Thank you for the lively conversation that I hope cultured men will read to AVOID the hell out of it in mean time! I won't use the cuckload tag because a) Girl was someone he barely met and already acknowledged her distaste 2. the thing with his brother and the woman with the child was me going overboard on the CEO-y female trope. Acknowledged. It didn't play well. Cuckload - man whose romantic partner is sexually unfaithful, often regarded as an object of derision. Was he in a relationship with the woman? No. It's not cuckloading then. There stands my logic. BUT of course arguing with the harem logic that every woman he meets is a harem member is a tiring battle and is a long-hold fantasy xD is of course ridiculous to argue because we all have our own tastes. But yes 🤔 Will change so thank you for the healthy discussion here!

BlaccLotus:Yeah that (1) would be better. Of course I'm not serious about the cuckold tag but it's not far from cuckold. Yes you're a woman, but you should know how the thing works, how we 'real' male readers see the things. For instance, a certain scene mentioned above, you could have avoided the 'cuckold' part by putting no importance to the girl, without highlighting her character or the scene where she and his brother are teasing each other/**** or whatever. We don't care about this cuckold detail. I'm not trying to be mean here but it's completely misleading. Good luck.

DemonPinkQueen:Author, but the girl he met was marked as a love interest in the story, although they knew each other very little and she felt disgust with him, and if I remember correctly, the girl felt disgust with men like her brother. I do not understand why he did what the brother did with the girl that it was quite obvious that he was going to take something to his brother as if the brother wanted to play a cuckold to the MC. I am very confused

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