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Parisian_Moon
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2021-04-09 14:22

"There comes a point where you have to ask yourself how much more of your soul you're willing to let the masses devour. How little remaining self can you learn to live without? Seems like you came here to expand yourself to connect to others, to erase the lines that keep us all separate but they came to tear little pieces off of you and compete over who had the biggest, brightest, prettiest piece. When they are done and they scatter off to the next person they will dismantle you for entertainment, you stand in silence and look at the pieces of you they've ripped away just lying on the ground and they are unrecognizable. They are no longer a part of you. You felt like a cold isolated absence when they've all gone away. It gets lonely so you read the feedback to get closer to them. They all circle around to spit venom about how inadequate you are. You gave them everything, they took it and then they'd decided you are nothing. No individual could devour you whole."

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cbowman782020
cbowman782020Lv13

Sorry but I don't see how this relates to the story. This is something along the lines of a Facebook post than a story review.

Parisian_Moon
Parisian_MoonLv10

im bored bruh at least it isn't emoji or exp 🤣

cbowman782020:Sorry but I don't see how this relates to the story. This is something along the lines of a Facebook post than a story review.
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cbowman782020
cbowman782020Lv13

Maybe so but it's like the second review seen when looking at the book. It doesn't do the story justice IMO. People immediately see a BS review and tend to walk away from it per se.

Parisian_Moon:im bored bruh at least it isn't emoji or exp 🤣
Parisian_Moon
Parisian_MoonLv10

ah that's your opinion i will accept it and that had nothing to do with me. if you see it as BS that's totally fine. i guess you havent seen the battlefield in here before but im happy you made a good review for my fellow author. thanks for supporting her. 🥰🥰

cbowman782020:Maybe so but it's like the second review seen when looking at the book. It doesn't do the story justice IMO. People immediately see a BS review and tend to walk away from it per se.
cbowman782020
cbowman782020Lv13

It would be different if the author changed the reviews so the ones that directly reflect are visible. oh well...

Parisian_Moon:ah that's your opinion i will accept it and that had nothing to do with me. if you see it as BS that's totally fine. i guess you havent seen the battlefield in here before but im happy you made a good review for my fellow author. thanks for supporting her. 🥰🥰
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