Very interesting read! Characters are very engaging and the story builds up nicely. As a reader, I’ve often had difficulty imagining different worlds in writing so my typical choices have always been reality-based fiction. However, this read came easy to me. The author’s choice of words immediately painted a picture. I would like to see a bit more background into the other character references mentioned. Looking forward to reading more of this author! Great job and keep going!
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theychimirollin:Thank you! That means a lot to me that it wasn't a difficult read. A few of the characters will be more fleshed out in the main story. If you're interested, the second one-shot is up and it's focused on a different race, the Fellden. It's called Killing Kei: Dark Helmets in a Light Room :)