Review Detail of Ahiraf_Mirak in My Cultivation System

So far so good. Very consistent, still there are tome when you find yourself questioning some scenario, so it kinda conflicting to me. But the pace of the story is very steady atleast that is whst I felt in the free chapters that I have read. But the Author tries to forcefully creat a mystery then breaks his own rythme by revealing the said mystery in a very lowsy way. Unfortunately not everyone can grasp the style of writing or creating mysteries or leaving hints and revealing it in a bit suspenseful manner. The written style had a bit immaturity and felt the Author hasn't quite settled in his own style. Some story scenarios are a bit awkward and not so refined. Just an honest review, no hate. Ps- Complain all you want about my lack of punctuation & unrefined sentencing along with my barely presentable grammer. I don't care. I am here for xp. I wrote a comment unfortunately not a review.