Review Detail of BerriApplepi in Lost in the World

Item: Lost in the World
Rating: 4.8

Review detail

BerriApplepiLv113yrBerriApplepi

The story is interesting. Although I saw a few minor errors especially in the tenses, it doesn't really hinder me in reading the book because of how smooth it was written. Good job author! Good luck![img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

Lost in the World

Nizrah_Moin

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Nizrah_MoinAuthorNizrah_Moin

thankyou dearie, if you could paragraph comment those errors out that would be much helpful. happy reading!

3yr