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Review Detail of Hizashi_sensei in Cultivation Online

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Hizashi_sensei
Hizashi_senseiLv103yrHizashi_sensei

The novel is good .But the MC is overly naive. Now don't get me wrong, I absolutely despise arrogant type MC's , but this time the MC doesn't even have self awareness. He is denying his achievements so much that it gets annoying over time. In a simple word the MC is stupid. The novel may be good later on, but first impression is valuable. If you cannot hold a reader to go through the first stages then it will be a huge loss. The MC can be naive, but being extremely stupid as well as being naive makes the MC a really unlikable character. So, I hope author can improve this. Anyways I'm just ranting. Good work by the way. 👍🏼👍🏼

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boov
boovLv5boov

i dropped it for that reason ...mc is too stupid ...but does he become aware of his stupidity at some point and changes or remains like that for 400chapters xD

Hizashi_sensei
Hizashi_senseiLv10Hizashi_sensei

No idea, I dropped it too. He is too naive for me to go through this story.

boov:i dropped it for that reason ...mc is too stupid ...but does he become aware of his stupidity at some point and changes or remains like that for 400chapters xD
The_Novel_Man
The_Novel_ManLv3The_Novel_Man

Would you like to try mine. Tamer of Cosmic Beasts.

boov:i dropped it for that reason ...mc is too stupid ...but does he become aware of his stupidity at some point and changes or remains like that for 400chapters xD
Eom
EomLv4Eom

He start to change after chapter 590, he lose friend(kinda)but its still snail speed changes so I dropped too.

Janmarkk
JanmarkkLv12Janmarkk

lol u do know that hes crippled and didnt interact much in his whole life

Josiah_Ferguson
Josiah_FergusonLv2Josiah_Ferguson

Well he's so dumb he gets graped and the dumb virgins who read thinks it's manly I dropped it then and there I means how can you be so stupid?

Hanshans
HanshansLv4Hanshans

I think that's precisely why it's illogical for him to be that naive. There's no way a person will be able to keep 'pure' thoughts only when he can't move an inch and got abandoned by his own family.

Janmarkk:lol u do know that hes crippled and didnt interact much in his whole life
Legacy_King
Legacy_KingLv1Legacy_King

that's what am saying, for some1 who literally got abandoned by his own parents to be such positive, doesn't add up

Hanshans:I think that's precisely why it's illogical for him to be that naive. There's no way a person will be able to keep 'pure' thoughts only when he can't move an inch and got abandoned by his own family.
Atomsphere
AtomsphereLv1Atomsphere

For the first few hundred chapters it's basically a honeymoon phase. Same thing with his manhood. He can't neither feel nor see his junk, he has never even watched movies and he only had his younger sister to talk to. Like most xianxia, this novel has an awful chapter to time progression ratio. A couple hundred chapters is just a few weeks. Not saying there's nothing wrong with the novel, just that what seems wrong is likely the result of a different problem.

DruggedCookie
DruggedCookieLv2DruggedCookie

If it changes later, by cap 690 more or less

boov:i dropped it for that reason ...mc is too stupid ...but does he become aware of his stupidity at some point and changes or remains like that for 400chapters xD
Ppz01
Ppz01Lv14Ppz01

same, I'm a lil late but I dropped it as well

boov:i dropped it for that reason ...mc is too stupid ...but does he become aware of his stupidity at some point and changes or remains like that for 400chapters xD
JanDarkv1
JanDarkv1Lv3JanDarkv1

Thanks, man, I didn't waste my time.

Eom:He start to change after chapter 590, he lose friend(kinda)but its still snail speed changes so I dropped too.
JanDarkv1
JanDarkv1Lv3JanDarkv1

Thanks, man, I didn't waste my time.

Rashidat_Idowu
Rashidat_IdowuLv12Rashidat_Idowu

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boov:i dropped it for that reason ...mc is too stupid ...but does he become aware of his stupidity at some point and changes or remains like that for 400chapters xD
Rashidat_Idowu
Rashidat_IdowuLv12Rashidat_Idowu

I just want to inform you guys, of this new awesome novels. Personally I really love this novel, and am sure everyone will enjoy it. I hope everyone who sees this, can give this novel a chance. The name is: Eradawn: Mythos Unveiled. As for those thinking am being paid to do this or whatever, certainly no. I Am sure the author doesn't even know about this, I only did this because I love the novel. Thanks

boov:i dropped it for that reason ...mc is too stupid ...but does he become aware of his stupidity at some point and changes or remains like that for 400chapters xD
Rashidat_Idowu
Rashidat_IdowuLv12Rashidat_Idowu

I just want to inform you guys, of this new awesome novels. Personally I really love this novel, and am sure everyone will enjoy it. I hope everyone who sees this, can give this novel a chance. The name is: Eradawn: Mythos Unveiled. As for those thinking am being paid to do this or whatever, certainly no. I Am sure the author doesn't even know about this, I only did this because I love the novel. Thanks

Eom:He start to change after chapter 590, he lose friend(kinda)but its still snail speed changes so I dropped too.
Rashidat_Idowu
Rashidat_IdowuLv12Rashidat_Idowu

I just want to inform you guys, of this new awesome novels. Personally I really love this novel, and am sure everyone will enjoy it. I hope everyone who sees this, can give this novel a chance. The name is: Eradawn: Mythos Unveiled. As for those thinking am being paid to do this or whatever, certainly no. I Am sure the author doesn't even know about this, I only did this because I love the novel. Thanks

Hanshans:I think that's precisely why it's illogical for him to be that naive. There's no way a person will be able to keep 'pure' thoughts only when he can't move an inch and got abandoned by his own family.
Rashidat_Idowu
Rashidat_IdowuLv12Rashidat_Idowu

I just want to inform you guys, of this new awesome novels. Personally I really love this novel, and am sure everyone will enjoy it. I hope everyone who sees this, can give this novel a chance. The name is: Eradawn: Mythos Unveiled. As for those thinking am being paid to do this or whatever, certainly no. I Am sure the author doesn't even know about this, I only did this because I love the novel. Thanks

Legacy_King:that's what am saying, for some1 who literally got abandoned by his own parents to be such positive, doesn't add up
Rashidat_Idowu
Rashidat_IdowuLv12Rashidat_Idowu

I just want to inform you guys, of this new awesome novels. Personally I really love this novel, and am sure everyone will enjoy it. I hope everyone who sees this, can give this novel a chance. The name is: Eradawn: Mythos Unveiled. As for those thinking am being paid to do this or whatever, certainly no. I Am sure the author doesn't even know about this, I only did this because I love the novel. Thanks

Ppz01:same, I'm a lil late but I dropped it as well
david_444
david_444Lv4david_444

yes he dos

boov:i dropped it for that reason ...mc is too stupid ...but does he become aware of his stupidity at some point and changes or remains like that for 400chapters xD