The set pace of the story and immersion is good, and the story concept is certainly not the mainstream and unique thus attracting readers right in. The only problem which I seem to find is the abrupt shift in the first-person and third-person narrative but that could be just my opinion may be fair to others. Keep it up Author, never stop dreaming.
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