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Blessing_EwetumoLv34yr
2021-01-03 01:08

The story is very compelling right from the beginning, the dialogue synopsis, everything intrigued me. Though there are grammatical errors, it didn't stop me from flowing with the story. And I'm sure with a little editing the story will flourish even more than it has, kids to the author. This is a definite read.👍

The Black Pearl

Yoursecretwriter99
4.5
6 Chs

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SilverFoxin
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Give it a read guys and show some love! Follow Demi on her adventure, she is such an interesting character, I am sure you'll just love her! The author paints vivid scenes!

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isharislynkia
isharislynkiaLv11

The plot has intrigued me to keep reading. Besides on that fact, the strong female lead is sure as fiesty one and was no novice on her fighting skills. However, there are some few certain dialogue that didn't fit out of my expectations. Some are too hasty and cringey but still turned out fine. I would like you to fix some of that and also, the story flow was getting interestingm I'm looking forward for the next chapter ^^

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caia_clearwood
caia_clearwoodLv2

Nice story. till now the aUthor has set a Steady pace. I wonder wHat will happeN next? Though i would have liked The author to explain more on the eight kingdoms and how they came to be, it doesnt deter the focus from the female lead. a few minor flaws here and there, but overall an interesting read. i would recommend this one to those who like a strong frmale lead in a good fantasy

4yr
Yoursecretwriter99
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Hi everyone, this is the author, yoursecretwriter99, dropping a shameless review because why not! So please read this book and rate it whether it's good to read or not. I'll accept any type of reviews to change whatever I have to change!! So please support me!!

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amber0613
amber0613Lv3

nice story author, it is really a fantasy. Even though Demetria was keeping to be a hard worker she can be just like a fantasy warrior. keep up the good work!

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Daoist1rIi0M
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Firstly I’d say the synopsis is mind blowing, it caught my attention and I’d love to read more. Good job Author, Id be back as a spoiler😂😂

4yr
DaoistQl11pjCieL
DaoistQl11pjCieLLv2

I love how the sypnosis intrigues me and is pulling me to read more! I must say, keep writing as your writing style caught my interest. I'll be willing to wait for more updates❤❤

4yr
TacoKun
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This novel is so good to be true, can't take my eyes away from this. It feels like heaven to read, I wanna read it so much. If this novel got some drive, then thanked God its still alive. This novel is so good to be true, can't take my eyes away from this. I need this novel like it's quite all right. I need this novel to warm my lonely nights. Just read this novel, cause I... say... Shameless Promotion: Check out my novel: Crowning Cruel Crow. Hahaha. https://m.webnovel.com/book/crowning-cruel-crow_18100192205265505

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Dugzaw
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You have a good story coming. I am interested to learn more about this female protagonist in the mystery behind this man named river. You're writing style has great detail which allows me to imagine what is going on. Great work for the author; I cannot wait to read more.

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