Review Detail of ThyUnknownSaint in I Can Track Everything

It's a hilarious story. I am satisfied with MC. He's cunning and not a push-over like 'I Am Not The Son of Providence'. But my problem is that the script keeps changing constantly and it doesn't stay in one place. This ruins the Cast of Characters that have a lot of potential and are no less hilarious. So it makes me sad. This is also a short novel so you can tell it wont go far!! The writing style really reminds me of "Skeleton Training Manual" I almost thought it was the same Author..[img=coins]