Item: Becoming Orihime Inoue
Rating: 5
Author: FlowerImmortal

FlowerImmortalLv44yr

2020-11-22 04:53

Well, I'm just going to hop onto the train from the other reviews. Firstly, 5* for the female lead. 5* for the system. 5* for Bleach. And 5* for a hopefully longer fanfic with a stable update rate! And another 5* for hopefully not making this a harem.

Becoming Orihime Inoue

Pill_Guy

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