Review Detail of Harpaa in The God Of The 7 Elements

maybe this the last review, the story before going to avengers world was great,the characters the story development the characters improvement,is all great and I can feel a personality of the OC, but it all end when the OC go to next world the characters become a kinda Bisexuals and even forgot the origin of his purpose in first universe, the MC just more hunger power and meet and attack other characters and the worst maybe because the fanfic fail to show its power to the reader, the writer decided to end this fanfic , hope the author will make another fics but didn't make a mistake like this one