Review Detail of RUFFI in Moonlit Chronicles of the Unambitious Magician

Please kindly point out where did I make the mistakes. I'll review those and I will fix those if I need to.

In the sovereign, concepts, secrets, faith and history are paramount !! All souls in this world originate from Akasha (The Swirl of the Root (根源 の 渦, Kongen no Uzu ?, "the Vortex of Radix" in the English localization), also known as the Root (根源, Kongen ?, " Radix "in the English localization), the Akashic Records (ア カ シ ッ ク レ コ ー ド, Akashikkurekōdo?), Or occasionally, Heaven (空, Sora?), Is a metaphysical location within the Nasuverse that acts as the" force "that exists at the top of all theories in every dimension, as well as the source of all events and phenomena in the universe. It is also referred to as the "Outside of the World," as opposed to the World and the Reverse Side of the World. Existing outside of time, it stores and archives information of all possibilities and events, past, present, and future, of the world. It is the place from where all souls, including those of Heroic Spirits recorded on the Throne of Heroes, originate from and to where they return after death., In Kara no Kyoukai, the Swirl of the Root, or Akashic Records, is the name used to p ronounce 「」 (quoted empty space, equivalent of ""), which is also referred to as "Emptiness" (空, Kara?) that is part of the title. [1] [2] Although, because the Swirl of the Root is a name, it automatically can't be said to be the same anymore, since 「」 is a space of nothingness that can't even have a name.) therefore they have origins and elements that affect character and personality than the more you plunge into your progression, the less freedom you have this is one of the main reasons why emiya shiro was so stupid and stubborn and kiritsugu !! The whole plot in this world is very cruel and desperate. Therefore, the fate of all is almost completely predetermined! The stronger the person's faith, the stronger the concepts and secrets! Very rarely in this world, a story ends nicely! Therefore, this world cannot be perceived as ordinary !! If the main character in this world has a strong background, the more difficult it will be for you to live (example: shiki tono / shiro emiya). Laurela simply cannot have such a character, even if her memory is erased, it will not change her fate! Even the story will be based on concepts (the camelot fell because Aktoria was trying to achieve the impossible), your plot is too fabulous and not real within the framework of this world! The fact that he is alive now is already a miracle of scarlet, guy, Kishua Zelretch Schweinorg, etc. could have killed him already. There is too much despair in this world! Translated by google translator

In the sovereign, concepts, secrets, faith and history are paramount !! All souls in this world originate from Akasha (The Swirl of the Root (根源 の 渦, Kongen no Uzu ?, "the Vortex of Radix" in the English localization), also known as the Root (根源, Kongen ?, " Radix "in the English localization), the Akashic Records (ア カ シ ッ ク レ コ ー ド, Akashikkurekōdo?), Or occasionally, Heaven (空, Sora?), Is a metaphysical location within the Nasuverse that acts as the" force "that exists at the top of all theories in every dimension, as well as the source of all events and phenomena in the universe. It is also referred to as the "Outside of the World," as opposed to the World and the Reverse Side of the World. Existing outside of time, it stores and archives information of all possibilities and events, past, present, and future, of the world. It is the place from where all souls, including those of Heroic Spirits recorded on the Throne of Heroes, originate from and to where they return after death., In Kara no Kyoukai, the Swirl of the Root, or Akashic Records, is the name used to p ronounce 「」 (quoted empty space, equivalent of ""), which is also referred to as "Emptiness" (空, Kara?) that is part of the title. [1] [2] Although, because the Swirl of the Root is a name, it automatically can't be said to be the same anymore, since 「」 is a space of nothingness that can't even have a name.) therefore they have origins and elements that affect character and personality than the more you plunge into your progression, the less freedom you have this is one of the main reasons why emiya shiro was so stupid and stubborn and kiritsugu !! The whole plot in this world is very cruel and desperate. Therefore, the fate of all is almost completely predetermined! The stronger the person's faith, the stronger the concepts and secrets! Very rarely in this world, a story ends nicely! Therefore, this world cannot be perceived as ordinary !! If the main character in this world has a strong background, the more difficult it will be for you to live (example: shiki tono / shiro emiya). Laurela simply cannot have such a character, even if her memory is erased, it will not change her fate! Even the story will be based on concepts (the camelot fell because Aktoria was trying to achieve the impossible), your plot is too fabulous and not real within the framework of this world! The fact that he is alive now is already a miracle of scarlet, guy, Kishua Zelretch Schweinorg, etc. could have killed him already. There is too much despair in this world! Translated by google translator

Hmm... interesting might need to research more about that thank you for pointing out

Only souls that came from Akasha can have elements and origins! The main character came from another world, so his soul is not from Akasha, so it is impossible for him to have an origin and an element! Even if by some miracle he has an origin and an element, then this should affect him! Tohsaka rin has 5 elements and 1 origin, this already makes her unstable and emotional and tsundere! And the main character has so many elements and origins that makes him either crazy or the wisest person in the world! And even yamato in this world and timeline, its possibilities are unknown! 1- this yamato is pure and has no history, what does it mean in this world he is like a newborn, so his strength is minimal! And his concepts and demonic legacy are dangerous. Alaya and Gaia will not let the emu be used at full strength! Emiya Shiro has the same problem, he makes an ideal copy, but there can be no two identical swords in the world, so Alai suppresses the power of his michi by 1 rank! Translated to google translator

Only souls that came from Akasha can have elements and origins! The main character came from another world, so his soul is not from Akasha, so it is impossible for him to have an origin and an element! Even if by some miracle he has an origin and an element, then this should affect him! Tohsaka rin has 5 elements and 1 origin, this already makes her unstable and emotional and tsundere! And the main character has so many elements and origins that makes him either crazy or the wisest person in the world! And even yamato in this world and timeline, its possibilities are unknown! 1- this yamato is pure and has no history, what does it mean in this world he is like a newborn, so his strength is minimal! And his concepts and demonic legacy are dangerous. Alaya and Gaia will not let the emu be used at full strength! Emiya Shiro has the same problem, he makes an ideal copy, but there can be no two identical swords in the world, so Alai suppresses the power of his michi by 1 rank! Translated to google translator

I can understand your previous comment but this one, "Rin is emotional unstable and tsun tsun", is an utter bs that even a dao of bs can't hold a candle to this. Just look at Ex-verse Rin. In timeline where magecraft died, Rin is still Rin. "Only souls that come from Akasha" MC's soul came from Akasa, Every reincarnation of MC came from the target worlds' Root or wherever the souls of that world come from. As for Yamato, I think you haven't read nor understand chapter 7. In that chapter, 3 of the MC's overpowered friends told 2 women to not to mess with MC. Which mean, they can't do anything to mess with the gifts his friends gave him; Yamato included. The one who control Nasuverse, I won't spoil who it is, also gave green light to let them watch MC.

I mean, Rin is at one moment calm as a stone, in another as flexible as water, and as violent as fire! She has five elements that is why her mood also changes quickly and quickly, that's all! Apparently, I explained badly! And yes, I really haven't read Chapter 7! But all souls after death return back to Akash, only 3 true magic allows you to avoid true death and return to Akash! It may seem that magic in this world is weak, but in fact in this world it is VERY difficult to use magic! Too many restrictions are special in the modern era! About a hundred secrets are used in mid-level magic! And the power of magic will wallow from person to person! The quality of a person's magic also depends on the pedigree, the closer the history of the pedigree to the era of the gods, the stronger the talent of the descendants! It will take power at the level of true magic to go through the process of rencarnation! And to be able to use magic, you need faith, the stronger the faith, the stronger the magic! Therefore, blogging families use hypnosis and self-deception! this is one of the reasons why I believe that Laurel cannot love the main character, and the Barthomeloi family taught Laurel that their family and their members are perfect, and all outsiders are just nonentities, they use mind magic to enhance theirs magic and pedigree! Barthomeloi Laurela is the current head of the Barthomeloi Magus family, acting deputy director of the clock tower. She shares her family's sense of aristocracy and her family's pride in her heritage, regarding the name "Lorelei" as just a minor name attached to her surname "Bartomeloy". While the Bartomeloes have a completely irrational hatred of vampires, Lorelei's own hatred is on a completely different level than any former member of her family, and even she cannot understand why she is so strong. Spending time hunting them as if it were natural, she often ignores her job as deputy director and even succumbs to the Church as a vampire hunter. While the policy of the Barthomeloi family is that a battle should be won even while it is proceeding, she feels that annihilating them is neither a trial or a battle, but rather a simple hunting game that should be completed with elegance and pleasure. She cannot stand that she was beaten to Louvre's castle by Enhance and DEATH, feeling like a headless chicken running around in circles instead of someone on a prideful hunt or battle. She almost passes out from the humiliation, bites her finger to the point of smearing blood on her gloves to stop grinding her teeth in anger, and promises to make DEATH pay for killing her prey and damaging her pride despite not having even met him. Translated by google translator

I kind of get what you want to talk about Lorelei. Only if MC is a SI. They would meet only when they became ***** and Lorelei won't love someone who is not perfect. But there is the thing called butterfly effect. By knowing and being friend with Lorelei since childhood, MC has changed her mind even if only for a little. In my fanfic, she takes pride in Barthomeloi name. But also treasures her connection with MC who doesn't treat her like a "Barthomeloi". There will be the reason why she hates DA so much in other timelines. I won't say more about that since it will be spoiling you. (Of course, my fanfic version.) And Lorelei is already considered perfect since 8 (also of course, in my fanfic version; please read chapter 7) And no, my MC didn't die in this universe. He was reincarnated. But he only got his memories around 20 years old. And MC's soul *will not* return to Akasha since higher level beings are interfering. So, your argument about 3 Magics is invalid.

Well, this is your novel and you decide! Good luck

I knew this when I was still playing FGO a year ago and now I'm a Genshin guy; but still a fan.

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