Review Detail of Clint_Johnson in Earth's Alpha Prime

Thank You for your encouraging words!

Hey, if you need tips and writing material, check my comment here, I will leave about 2~4 comment draft there that i made in the past, should be helpful for you (take it at your own pace though, because it a bit long, and you can check anytime anyway, and it fine to only take some and not use the rest if they not suit your novel): *If you need advice and material to research, check this website of "Limyaael's Rants" below, it have over 400 topics for you to learn advice to write those topic there (take a grain of salt since some more like a rule rather than advice/tips, which isn't alway good) https://curiosityquills.com/limyaael/ then you can check the youtuber "terrible writing advice", it will show you how "not" to write those topic https://youtube.com/watch?v=TTZEFGvMH0k You can also check my main thread for any material you need here, also there are a list of good novel you can check there in my post for idea https://royalroadl.com/forums/thread/98657 (google "Forum And Writing Directory for Authors" on royalroad if you can't find my post)

* For more idea to use, especially the first one: + Sometime you need to show certain trump card of your to get certain benefit/prevent something there, for example in certain novel, one of your friend have get a dangerous ability that basically make other losing their life span and potential for further strenght there, and other faction, especially the enemy don't want to face it in the fight in the future (and currently that friend didn't joint any strong faction to have a backing aside from the mc group), so they try to assasinate him, but since the mc managed to make a teleport item that ignore all space restriction, and although he plan to hide this trump card, but notice the situation, he plan to deliberately show this card when rescure his friend, so now other can't do it now since that friend can just escape any time when they try to do so (even with trap that prevent normal teleporting), oh and don't forgot that friend are at least strong enough to not get one shoot/capture right away so he still can disappear easily. Basically it good to keep the trump card for emergency, but something you need to reveal it to gain benefit or for deterent again other from making similar thing like that again + Another idea is some certain event, although it seem like someone are planning beind to cause trouble, but when go to the source of it, the mc end up noticed that it was a unintened accident/butter fly effect. The example here is a wave of 4 arm monkey suddenly come to this region and attack the local (the thing is they should only in the way eastern side of forest instead of here), we thought it was a conspiracy (since one of the mc ally was in that region and get attacked, and they need reinforce), but in the end after the mc group try to figure out, they finally notice that the reason those monkey beast do a mass migration here is because the faction on the other side was expanding (and have nothing to do with this attacked local or mc group), and end up take over/over hunting this monkey Ecosystem, so they forced to move to other place due to that consequence/butter fly effect. So basically it a coincident, not all the events have to be around/about the mc or conspirecy thing, the mc could be just happen to be there, too many novel keep make the universe bend and go around the mc and not the opposite + And some really good video on youtube that help for planning there, and also quite realistic (but remember, those thing are more as a tool, not as a mindset): - DESTROY, DO NOT WOUND | The Prince by Niccolo Machiavelli - The 48 Laws of Power (Animated) - BE FEARED | The Prince by Niccolo Machiavelli - The Rules for Rulers + Self-Awareness That Transmigrators/mc ruler Should Have (if you want to make the team more important): This is what I like about this work. Not an all knowing protagonist who never misses a thing and comes up with everything by himself, while every else is just there to worship and imitate him after he shows them the way. He acknowledges from the start that he not the smartest person in the world, even intelligent as he is. But he's able to see what needs to be done, bring everyone together and point them in the right direction and has the understanding to see what's worth developing and what isn't while possessing the ability to make it all happen. He doesn't need to have all the talent personally. Just the ability to find those with the talents he needs, develop them and put the to work. He's completely essential to the plot while not being overpowered and making everyone else redundant. Very hard to come by in web novels. Most kingdom building novel forgot that people skills are as important, and that Leader of the geniuses are also fine even if the mc are not as good as other. (Source from chapter 218 of 'sword of dawnbreaker', too bad they stop translate it : https://***.webnovel.com/book/11022737906234605/45873928370977337/Sword-of-Dawnbreaker/Self-Awareness-That-Transmigrators-Should-Have)

Will there be Romance in this Story? Drama? Tragedy? Harem?

Romance?, yes but it would start in Arc-3. Harem? Nope. (Harem Genre Fans, sry about that.) Drama? yes but it's minimal and not to a point where a 'Drama' tag could be added to the novel. Tragedy? There would be elements of it but not a full-fledged tragedy. Actually, from the perspective of an Author, the tragedy aspect in a story is helpful as it stirs the Reader's emotions to root for their character and such. But when I consider myself as a Reader, I read web novels to escape reality for a while and clear my mind or to feel good by imagining myself in that fantasy or maybe even as the MC myself. What I want for my Readers is to enter my Novel fantasy and to feel better but if I were to add a pure tragedy, that would dampen the mood and I don't want that for my Novel Readers. (Here, when I talked about tragedy, what I intended was Dark tragedy.) (This is just my opinion on Tragedy aspect in Novels. So, take it lightly.)

Hello there, since last year my friend is writing a book. His book is about bloodlines, kingdoms, and superpowers. The problem is he is not getting any support. I told him to share on a couple of sites but it didn't get any attention. If you guys can check that out and leave a comment it would be really good for him. Have a good day. The book's name is: Wolf Bloodline