Review Detail of ipar_noob in Koby the Pokémon Master

usually don't write a review but i just had to because this is by far the best one piece fanfic I ever read! aside from a few grammatical errors it is perfect in my eyes. it follows the original plot with coby in it, the pacing of the story is great, the mc and his pokemon have lovable personalities and he writes all the characters really well like they are original characters. and if you don't like systems like me don't be scared the system here is not really a system it's more like an afterthought than the primary focus of the story. So in summary the story is a great read. I really recommend it! keep going author-san!