I think it's really good! The grammar and execution could be a bit better, but the concept overall is great. Also, if you ever need a beta reader/editor, you can PM me, and i'd be down to help out.
wakadanna
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LIKEMy bad, I forgot that webnovel doesn't have PMs, like fanfic(dot)net does. However, there are other possible ways we can communicate. If you are part of the webnovel writers discord, (the link is in the writing section of webnovel) you can PM me there and copy your chapters to a Google Doc, where I edit it. My nickname in the server is the same as my webnovel, ImProcrastinating.
wakadanna:Thank you for the review and for the advice. yes, I think I need a beta reader/editor. I'm still new at this. how can I PM you? again thanks for the help
ImProcrastinating:My bad, I forgot that webnovel doesn't have PMs, like fanfic(dot)net does. However, there are other possible ways we can communicate. If you are part of the webnovel writers discord, (the link is in the writing section of webnovel) you can PM me there and copy your chapters to a Google Doc, where I edit it. My nickname in the server is the same as my webnovel, ImProcrastinating.
wakadanna:Okay, I'll just PM you. first, I will try to stockpile it and will let you know.