Review Detail of Samuel812753 in The last mage of Krypton

I love this fanfic. I love how things are going and how you're putting your own twists in it. Love what you did with the basilisk it's a good way to show that the reason why it did what it did was purely because it was being controlled and forced to do what it did. In the novels and books, the basilisk itself was a huge plot hole, and so was the chamber. I'm mean, seriously, they both had lots of potential I love how people write they own Twists about them and just the story in particular by pretty much making the story there own by adding their own ideas and filling in stuff that the books or movies never got around to. There are so many things in the books and movies that were never really explored. I'm glad that you guys use your own ideas to explore these things it makes your works really worth reading. Can't wait for more chapters and how the story goes from here