webnovel
DeepThinkingBanana
DeepThinkingBananaLv132yr
2022-02-24 02:10

I really enjoyed the first part of this story; how comical the Female Lead is and how the Male Lead tries to overcome his challenges. But it came to a point that FL is becoming a bit too much for me. Her actions may not have been for the era the story is in, so I just let it pass. Then I got frustrated with the way the Eldest Brother has been acting towards his wife. There is a glimmer of hope on how he can make a turnaround for his marriage but I can just be happy with Shen Yan marrying someone else for the sake of her own happiness. But what I can't let on is how this Bai people acted (Chapter 584?), I just can't stomach it in. My emotions rose and bubbling out of frustration so I've decided to let this go.

Liked by 2 people

LIKE
empty img

No replies. Be the first!

Other Reviews
Xinaria
XinariaLv5
Joannekey
JoannekeyLv5

Hmmm.. starting is very humour ,nice, fresh from other novel, love it if it will develop into this line or more interestingly.. this rating review is as of time being chapter 40. Cause i would like to see more improvement or best slot.. Just hope that the story will NOT develop into something like BAD ending to all.. EG:- 1st son divorce hurt the wife , wife being hurt n bully by the so call junior sister, even innocent being rope n d reputation of her family all jeopardise n bankrupt, cheated n pregnant without marriage by scum, totally destroyed. And yet the 1st son still marry the green tea junior sister. bring more harms to the ex wife n family members. The 3rd son - got his own son back but hurt the love of his live. Marry a white bitch instead of d love n his own son mommy. Own son being tortured by the white bitch. Own love being humilated n hurt, bully n desperated to live her life. The 4th sister - happiness being rope n broken by the bad people. Get rape due to the enemy revenge. Yet she still want to save n help the enemy as she pity her. Ends up she leave her family without people knowing her own sad plight. Pregnant alone. Her love cant be with her due to her promise to his parents which is his parents wanted revenge. The 2nd brother - die. Watch the wife being rape by others n not save her. Knowing his wife is already dead n the soul that occupy is in fact 500 yrs old he cant accept it. When he realise n ready to accept d 500 yr old soul change to oth ppl soul his sister white lotus fren. In order to hope his husband happy with a young soul so that he can accept n in order to save n repay the revenge on behalf of the 4th sister , second wife is ready to sacrifice all.. miserable ending for everyone as they die. IF it is like this then i really will feel very sad .. n dissapointed.. cause the starting is such a good one.. Hopefully the ending will be a happy ending to all.. 😘

Related Stories

Surprise Marriage to a Billionaire

Fate bound them in a surprise marriage… Will they fight for freedom or surrender to a love that could last forever? ***** Rain Clayton’s life takes an unexpected turn when she discovers she’s suddenly married to a billionaire named Alexander Lancaster, a powerful and dangerously captivating man who wants their marriage over before it even begins... Raised by a family that never cared for her and desperate to avoid a twisted arranged marriage, Rain seizes this unexpected twist of fate. Her new husband might be a cold-hearted billionaire, but he's her only escape. Yet Alexander demands a swift divorce. Refusing to lose her one chance at freedom, Rain strikes a risky bargain to keep their marriage alive, even if it means playing by Alexander’s rules. She just has to convince him to want her around—FOREVER. Weeks into their unexpected arrangement, Rain begins to see through Alexander’s icy exterior. But one night, she’s taken by surprise. “What are you doing?” Rain burst out, eyes wide as Alexander casually slid into her bed. “Performing husbandly duties,” he smirked. “You can’t stay here! It’s against the contract!” “I’m not breaking it,” Alexander said with a shrug. “The contract specifies that you’ll fulfill all wifely duties, excluding sharing my bed. It doesn’t say anything about me not performing husbandly duties, including sharing your bed.” The situation had shifted, and it seemed like she was no longer the only one in control... [Warning: r18+/strong mature & sexual content]

Eustoma_Reyna · Urban
4.8
363 Chs

Rebirth: Pampered by My Children and Husband

After Lin Xu died, she discovered that the world she was in was a novel. Her eldest son liked to imprison the female protagonist of the novel, engaging in sinister villainous acts with a dark room play. Her youngest son would unfailingly draw substitute's blood and snatch substitutes' kidneys for the female protagonist’s legal antagonist — his unrequited love. Her only daughter was the romantic fool forever revolving around the male protagonist of the novel. If children are not disciplined, the mother is to blame. After being reborn, Lin Xu felt she should step in and discipline her wayward children. However, before she could take action, her eldest son’s dark, handsome, and usually cold face blushed slightly as he asked in a low voice, “Can I touch my head?” The middle son snorted and turned his head, his tone petulant, “I... I don’t want to go home, but if you insist, I'll do it begrudgingly.” The youngest daughter rushed over, mercilessly pushing her brothers aside, “Mom, come and teach me how to solve this problem~” Latter, both sons fought over the bowl of noodles Lin Xu cooked. What was a novel’s female protagonist? Nothing compared to their mother. The daughter transformed herself, letting nothing from any novel’s male protagonist interfere with her studies! The family was blissfully happy. Latter, the revived, amnesiac husband suddenly appeared, cornering her against the wall, his eyes full of struggle, “Even if you're married, I still love you.” Lin Xu pretended to be serious, “Is that so, then what should we do?” He hugged her tightly, his voice muffled and pained, “Divorce him!” Lin Xu chuckled secretly, “I’ll divorce him right away.” Latter, after the husband regained his memory, he said through gritted teeth, “Over my dead body will we divorce!”

Red tea cheese · Urban
4.5
167 Chs

Standing Next To You

A man in his thirties was standing in front of she-devil's grave, under everyone's watchful eyes, he dropped the flower to her coffin, his tone was full of ridicule. "Congrats on your death." Next year he came, "I won. You lost to me and I will live well. Just rot in there." Next year he came again, "I have a pretty girlfriend and I will marry next year. My life is good. Nothing to worry about." Next year he came once more, "I will stop visiting and forget you! My life is better without you! See, I live well!" But he came again the next year and the years after that. People said he was hunted by his so-called arch-enemy. That even after death, the devil did not even let him go. He stood in front of her grave. His once handsome face had turned old and wrinkly. "Bei Sangyun, I cursed you. You are not allowed to rest in peace. You must be suffering there like me, right? You devil..." He might be the last one standing. But his life was the same as the dead's- lifeless and empty. He did not live well, he never once marry and his heart was never at peace. And it was all the fault of one person. ***** Bei Sangyun was a big bully in high school. The target of her bullying was the skinny boy in her grade, Fei Chuan. They were classmates once in kindergarten and met again in high school. But one day, just a year left before graduation, the big bully suddenly changed. One day, Fei Chuan hesitantly opened his locker. The other night, the big bully said that she left something in his locker. He did not really want to open it. He was afraid a poisonous snake would come out of his locker. However, his report card was there. With gritted teeth, the young boy opened it. However, what appeared was not a hideous thing as he expected, but a bright pink letter with a little heart sticker as a seal. It turned out, the surprise was scarier than a snake. Was this a new form of torture? Since then, Bei Sangyun relentlessly chased the young Fei Chuan until the two got married. ****** This is a story of rebirth. The two arch-enemies who could not live under the same sky had become sweet lovers.

Avalondra · Urban
4.8
484 Chs