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Madamsophia19
Madamsophia19Lv153yr
2021-01-07 03:37

Sometimes I wonder if these authors research for their books or just harp on without any knowledge of the subject matter. Children are the most innocent thing especially at their beginning stage. No matter how terrible a mother is, I find it very difficult to believe that the kid will be calling her by her name instead of aunty or something else. And a four year old is not matured enough to be having these kinds of ***** conversations. You don’t need to have a kid to know one, just read up about them or go babysit one. A four year old does not care about how the parents are feeling about each other especially when the said parents are not even in his life together. So much contradictions in the book. Either the author forgot the outline of the book or just freestyled it.

Dr. Jiang's Daily Adversities

The Emperess
4.4
1255 Chs

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AnonyMer
AnonyMerLv13

yep, it's even worse in other novels with 2 or 3 year olds having full dialogue conversations ... some 3 year olds may be building sentences but poorly, but a 2year old is just starting to potty train and no way is full sentence a concept they grasp in communicating (usually basic sentences picked up, like I want 'that' or I don't want to rather that able to carry full conversation). I don't care if author wants the kid to be near genius from birth or what. the only time i accept is narrative is if a full adult reborn into infancy so mentally they are capable but overcoming physical limits from young to growing up. Some authors don't seem full out ignorant of designing kid characters but vast majority on WN seem to depict young kids will unbelievable mentalities. heck, for research they could watch any of the multiple live stream or niche reality shows where they have little kids go buy soy sauce or first time going to school to grasp what an average baby can do or act like.

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nureha
nurehaLv4

this story seems very familiar. I think I have already read the raw of this book. if I remember correctly [POSSIBLE SPOILERS]⚠️ the FL was reborn and decided that she no longer wants to be with the ML but they already have a son and the FL realized that she wants to make it up to him since she didn't care for him in her first life. the FL also asked for a divorce with the ML but it was dragged for a long time until the FL discovered that everything was a misunderstanding since she thought that the ML doesn't likes her but in reality he actually loves her since long ago. it was due to a scheme in which the ML thought that the FL was the one who initiated the divorce but she actually didn't. the FL also misunderstood the divorce papers in their room that the ML wanted to divorce her causing to a series of misunderstandings that was only cleared in their second life. I no longer know what happens next since I forgot (I read to many stories to ever remember every single one of them😎). well that was long.

3yr

isabellechoi2276
isabellechoi2276Lv4

i really hope this book is chosen! from what i infer i think the FL has been reborn and regrets only devoting herself to the ML so she’s going on with her life and spending more time with their son. the ML isn’t suddenly completely in love with her like in some novels but you can tell that she affects him. overall i just really think its well written and the translator has left footnotes to clear some confusing things up. i recommend to everyone who loves a strong FL, the whole child plot line, and a mighty ML

3yr
Imm_I
Imm_ILv2

Im early again!! But the synonsis sounds really good. Oh and i realized there are only 40 chapters rn dont know if anything happend or anything but like we should have 80 chapters for the trial read thing

3yr
andrwood
andrwoodLv6

She was reborn. She was at war. Why is she so dumb? Why does she allow herself to be manipulated? Why did this person treat her badly, but suddenly begins to love her when it gets late? These formulaic Chinese novels are very disappointing. Maybe this is some kind of Chinese fetish? At first, you are treated like dirt, and then ml begins to persecute the fl and does it in the wrong way. This is some kind of nonsense.

3yr
animelover1477
animelover1477Lv15

i was bored and frustrated with this book. I like the fl, imand thought she was going to be a strong chacter. especially after rebirth after she recognized fawning over a man for years and he gave no responses is not worth it. it was better for her to divorce than to be stuck in it for years. i didnt like the ml from the first line. i hate the fact that to writting was leading to the ml starting to take an interest in the fl after she now flipped the script and wants the divorce, too little to late. and i felt after years , i dont care if it was a scheme, it felt like an ego trip that because fl in the past was clingy before and he hated , now she gave him a firm attitude he now want to get together with her😑🙄. and the annoying fact that ppl want to have not to divorce even though they know he was treating her bad is ridiculous, it seemed like everytume she wanted to get the divorce it was pushed back ,one excuse after another. Either way i dont like this pairing, if they even end up together you just have those frustrations and want to pull ur hair out, thats how i felt reading the few chapters. it erked me to feel that the strong fl will cave in for a man that treated her lke shit. im like did she not learn her lesson. and the ml was giving out oppressive vibes, like early one after her change he asked his subordinates to find out her recent activity, like do you not have basic respect for human rights, and i felt he would push her into the limelight since he is a start or force her to pick up the mantle of 'his wife' like she is his possesion so no one can have her. butthis is yrs after the fact he didnt give her the time of day.🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄😡🤬 series dropped

3yr
Nemesis1224
Nemesis1224Lv4

This is a pretty short and straight forward story compare to others. But what I don't get is why he ignored his wife for 4 years and suddenly had a change of attitude. That just too much right. How about the dream she experience she forgive him so quick. Also Mo is too shamless.

3yr
IGBOH_CHIDERA
IGBOH_CHIDERALv1

I don't recommend this to anyone, I can't believe the author can boldly condem Africa as if they are all animals living in it. What a racist 😡😡

3yr
Anonism
AnonismLv15

Could be a good story if the author wasn't obsessed with writing two people who share no interest in each other together. the female lead is kind of interesting since she returned back ten years in the past but the male lead is bland and boring. the biggest emotion you get out of him over more than 40 chapters is that the woman he wanted to divorce now wants to divorce as well and he doesn't like that. it's stupid and honestly just makes me think the author wished his/her parents hadn't divorced. the story progression is paint by numbers for these types of stories where everyone is conspiring to push these two together against their wishes and just lack any real personality. I wouldn't recommend this story unless you REALLY have nothing else to do.

3yr
Dayside
DaysideLv12

Pure trash with a rather rapey male lead. The plot feels pretty forced I read 150 chapters and it went literally no where. Incredibly boring and predictable mess.

3yr
WorldsSpectatorJ
WorldsSpectatorJLv4

The start of this story may seems so full of nonsense when you first read it and have the urge to drop but I'll tell you— "Keep on reading!" "Don't drop it" The story is slow because the author can't (or maybe he/she doesn't know how) give the Family, being a Mother, Relationship and her career, Doctor, a balance here— ... —as to why he doesn't want to marry her and was force by grandpa Mo, I won't explain what really happened for y'all to find it out, it may take some, uhm, 300+ chapters to find out it's not long.. I love the part where the misunderstanding is fixed! Because it is close to reality— uhm.. this potato won't explain it.. Cuz it doesn't know how to so just "Keep on reading!" ... Their relationship is full of misunderstanding cuz Mr. ML doesn't want to explain everything to her and cause her to misunderstood him, Mr. ML doesn't want to burden her and carry everything himself— I'll give you a hint: "...I wish to be trusted, to have equal understanding and equal respect..." "...two most important things between a Husband and A Wife [Trust and Communication]" anyway I won't talk about anymore, "You! Keep on Reading To Find Out!" ... As for the divorce papers of course it has an explanation, you know, there is a B* ... I JUST WANT MORE INTERACTION OF ML AND FL... A PASSIONATE ONE, HAHAHAHA, 👀, slap me ... This is such a good and wonderful story if you ask me, I think the author is new when he/she wrote it. That is why somethings may out of you or whatnot If you ask me there are, sometimes, where I just want to hide and close this to calm my emotions because of the author's writing, HAHAHAHA! Such a good story I hope they don't drop it cuz I know this is ALREADY COMPLETE in Raw, WN is in MESS right now cuz some almost complete and not almost complete Novels is stopped getting translated and I'm getting frustrated about it... 😢, I hope they continue translating those wonderful story...

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