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It's a very good story, it has a medium and consistent evolution showing the beginning of his career at the base, his rise to the club, being a champion, living life and training, the movement of the games and the plots within them, the writing of the game is very cool pity that if he wants to put more details it would be better for him to use Fifa's path to stardom or career mode the game, the only flaw is that spoiler the author kills his grandmother after killing his grandmother distances him from his girlfriend puts a pregnancy in the story and out of nowhere takes the pregnancy in less than 30 chapters as he still hasn't won the chamions you can't think when he will become the captain and interfere with the team again to create a team to win champions consecutively and the most curious thing is which world cup he will make Zachary win he didn't even enter the selection right and he already won hostility from Yaya Troure

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