During the first 40 chapters I was very frustrated reading this novel because it was almost the exact carbon copy of Desolate era. I like desolate era but I did not want to read something exact similar to it. But I managed to endure and believe me I was glad that I did not drop this novel because it was fricking great. I all recommend all of you to stick to it until the end. Dear author you did a great job there but I think you should change your writing style a bit since you write a lot of chapters about some things which were not necessary like you spend 5 chapter just explaining the abilities of eye of myriad dao which could have been done in just about 2.5 chapters. So what I want to say is that you focus a lot on unnessary chapters. Anyway keep up the good work.
ORIGIN_ESSENCE
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LIKEHe never said, that he "loved it". He told you that you were plagiarising the first 40 chapters and that you already have the habit to pad words/ use info dump/filler chapters.
ORIGIN_ESSENCE:I'm glad you loved it 😊😊😊 [img=recommend][img=coins][img=fp][img=coins][img=recommend]