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Shoab_Ahamed
Shoab_AhamedLv43yr
2021-03-25 03:17

During the first 40 chapters I was very frustrated reading this novel because it was almost the exact carbon copy of Desolate era. I like desolate era but I did not want to read something exact similar to it. But I managed to endure and believe me I was glad that I did not drop this novel because it was fricking great. I all recommend all of you to stick to it until the end. Dear author you did a great job there but I think you should change your writing style a bit since you write a lot of chapters about some things which were not necessary like you spend 5 chapter just explaining the abilities of eye of myriad dao which could have been done in just about 2.5 chapters. So what I want to say is that you focus a lot on unnessary chapters. Anyway keep up the good work.

The Legend of Min Hong

ORIGIN_ESSENCE
4.7
601 Chs

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ORIGIN_ESSENCE
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Karyehs
KaryehsLv4

He never said, that he "loved it". He told you that you were plagiarising the first 40 chapters and that you already have the habit to pad words/ use info dump/filler chapters.

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cutelit4ever
cutelit4everLv12

Wow, the way the author delivers his masterpiece is really fascinating. I mean, it is a truly good story, the conversation and the action itself makes you want to read more and more. I like it ♥ Hope to read more from you, author sama.

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buhahaha
buhahahaLv5

I haven't even read the novel. Just the synopsis. But for that I'll give you a five star. I'm still reading Lord of the Mysteries. After finishing I'll give your novel a go. Bro, one thing. Put reader's first, fine. But don't get tired from all the posterior ends in the platform who complain about every single thing. Pace the novel well so that you don't get tired from writing. Character development, plot, grammar, everything can be learnt from experience. This is just your first novel. Take into consideration your mentality too. Don't get too tired so that you leave it without end. Take a hiatus. So many authors who had good ideas or potential for a story, stopped after some time cuz people where blabbering about character development and stuff. They tried to please the readers whithout thinking of themselves and got tired so they stopped the novel.

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Boluwatife_julius
Boluwatife_juliusLv1

Reveal spoiler

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Juin
JuinLv2

Shameless request, but whatever. Please don’t turn this into a harem where the mc surprises all the bad guys and wins the hearts of all the maidens. I don’t want to see another story with potential become a harem novel that can only repeat the same thing over and over.

3yr
type12345
type12345Lv14

I like the story very much. My problem is that it seems to be extremly similar to Desilate era. While adding the additional cheats to the Mc, the stories seen way too similar.

4yr
Chrazi87
Chrazi87Lv15

Ch. 1-13 don't seem to have anything to do with the rest of the story. Has there been some mistake? I'm confused. It's like somebody dropped those chapters in and deleted the originals.

2yr
DaoistCrazy1122
DaoistCrazy1122Lv13

Amazing potential, good grammar, and well thought out!!!! This a superb story I hope you don't drop this because I love this story I hope you make this 1000+ chapters and make many more cultivation realms

4yr
wavy95
wavy95Lv4

even though only 10 chapters released so far. author starts with interesting story line... I look forward to the rest of chapters to be released... Author-san 🙏💯❤️

4yr
Douglas_Lanora
Douglas_LanoraLv1

Hey there! Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact keraringdom@gmail.com. A brief introduction, some sample chapters or links will be appreciated when reaching out.

4yr
syxhdud
syxhdudLv4

The fact that it is an original, and you could still come up with this kind of suspenseful synopsis, makes reading this novel worth the time. Then there's the treasure, 'The Eye of Myriad Universe'. Catchy name, cool synopsis, and a unique cover page. You have my attention. [img=update]

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