Review Detail of eccentricbeing18 in (Haitus) Blood Of the New Moon
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Ugh... My head hurts reading this! Brushed off details, boring isolated plot, unnecessary details, shallow characters, and grade school grammar. I don't even know what kind of werewolf this is! Training arc and meeting malia but still no explanation. And the **** was that about silver hair? It's a patch up frankenstein of a story and your already giving hints of future events?? Really?? I watched **** wolf and even I was confused of the lack of important information while adding weird ones that doesn't even have any explanation. That's me who watched it, what about those who don't?? Story telling of a grade schooler.
(Haitus) Blood Of the New Moon
Master_Livythan
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I didn't mind the other 1 star review because the person actually had a point, he did help people even though they ended up joining his pack afterwards But you're trying to sound so sophisticated yet it makes no sense and only highlights your ignorance Let me break it down for you S-L-O-W-L-Y According to you I brushed off details, which if you took the time to read and stop blowing hot air you'd notice From the first chapter we all saw( clearly not you ) that he is the same type of werewolf as the others but because of Fascalli's blessing(unlocked his inner wolf which they don't have) and his own knowledge he knows how to get stronger while they will never surpass alpha Fascalli's hair is silver, she saw him as a tool so why wouldn't she leave her mark on him? Are you following along? I have to check since you obviously have limited brain cells to not understand something so simple What important details have I missed? in the first FUCKING!!!!! episode of **** wolf, which I watched while reading this might I add, none of my chapters have past the first episode so could you explain that part? Once again highlighting your ignorance Those so called 'weird' details are part of MY fanfic which this is since you seemed to have forgotten sorry if that's to many details for your miniscule to process, I apologise if I hurt you head once more
Master_Livythan:I didn't mind the other 1 star review because the person actually had a point, he did help people even though they ended up joining his pack afterwards But you're trying to sound so sophisticated yet it makes no sense and only highlights your ignorance Let me break it down for you S-L-O-W-L-Y According to you I brushed off details, which if you took the time to read and stop blowing hot air you'd notice From the first chapter we all saw( clearly not you ) that he is the same type of werewolf as the others but because of Fascalli's blessing(unlocked his inner wolf which they don't have) and his own knowledge he knows how to get stronger while they will never surpass alpha Fascalli's hair is silver, she saw him as a tool so why wouldn't she leave her mark on him? Are you following along? I have to check since you obviously have limited brain cells to not understand something so simple What important details have I missed? in the first FUCKING!!!!! episode of **** wolf, which I watched while reading this might I add, none of my chapters have past the first episode so could you explain that part? Once again highlighting your ignorance Those so called 'weird' details are part of MY fanfic which this is since you seemed to have forgotten sorry if that's to many details for your miniscule to process, I apologise if I hurt you head once more
Master_Livythan:I didn't mind the other 1 star review because the person actually had a point, he did help people even though they ended up joining his pack afterwards But you're trying to sound so sophisticated yet it makes no sense and only highlights your ignorance Let me break it down for you S-L-O-W-L-Y According to you I brushed off details, which if you took the time to read and stop blowing hot air you'd notice From the first chapter we all saw( clearly not you ) that he is the same type of werewolf as the others but because of Fascalli's blessing(unlocked his inner wolf which they don't have) and his own knowledge he knows how to get stronger while they will never surpass alpha Fascalli's hair is silver, she saw him as a tool so why wouldn't she leave her mark on him? Are you following along? I have to check since you obviously have limited brain cells to not understand something so simple What important details have I missed? in the first FUCKING!!!!! episode of **** wolf, which I watched while reading this might I add, none of my chapters have past the first episode so could you explain that part? Once again highlighting your ignorance Those so called 'weird' details are part of MY fanfic which this is since you seemed to have forgotten sorry if that's to many details for your miniscule to process, I apologise if I hurt you head once more
Kokushibou:Why are getting all butthurt over a review of a random person on the internet?🤣image
So you can write a paragraph with little to no mistakes on why this guy is an idiot but can't even write a chapter without messing up.
Master_Livythan:I didn't mind the other 1 star review because the person actually had a point, he did help people even though they ended up joining his pack afterwards But you're trying to sound so sophisticated yet it makes no sense and only highlights your ignorance Let me break it down for you S-L-O-W-L-Y According to you I brushed off details, which if you took the time to read and stop blowing hot air you'd notice From the first chapter we all saw( clearly not you ) that he is the same type of werewolf as the others but because of Fascalli's blessing(unlocked his inner wolf which they don't have) and his own knowledge he knows how to get stronger while they will never surpass alpha Fascalli's hair is silver, she saw him as a tool so why wouldn't she leave her mark on him? Are you following along? I have to check since you obviously have limited brain cells to not understand something so simple What important details have I missed? in the first FUCKING!!!!! episode of **** wolf, which I watched while reading this might I add, none of my chapters have past the first episode so could you explain that part? Once again highlighting your ignorance Those so called 'weird' details are part of MY fanfic which this is since you seemed to have forgotten sorry if that's to many details for your miniscule to process, I apologise if I hurt you head once more
Mans_1_Not_2_Hot_3:So you can write a paragraph with little to no mistakes on why this guy is an idiot but can't even write a chapter without messing up.