I'm not a fan of gaming but your book illustrates the settings, thoughts and emotions of the players all too well. It reminds me of The King's Avatar movie. I don't have background knowledge for gaming so reading the first part confuses me at first. But as I read on, it gets better and you depicted it well. Nice job author!
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LIKEThank you so much for trying the story! Yeah sorry if the first chap was a bit confusing in terms of the game. I didn't really want to front load it too much and tried to shift it back until like chapter four for the tutorial rip. Also super random but is the King's Avatar good 0.0 Not super familiar with it but my friend is literally in love with Yang Yang rip
phoenixhyperion:It was awesome. Because of king's avatar I fell in love with gaming movies! And Yang Yang's totally cool in there. You should try it too if you have time. ^_^