Review Detail of RJMidnight in RK: Contracted

Item: RK: Contracted
Rating: 4.2

Review detail

RJMidnightLv33yrRJMidnight

This story is good and I like that you gave terminology. This could be a hidden gem. But, there are grammar problems. Fragment sentences, missing punctuations, unclear wording, and some unneeded capitalization. I did see two contractions that I don’t think exist. Other than that, if you fix those mistakes, there will be something good here. Keep up the good work!

RK: Contracted

KaGen

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KaGenAuthorKaGen

Thank you so much for your detaily analysis.I'll check and fix it tonight🤙

3yr

KaGenAuthorKaGen

And additionally, i chose English words when it's optional, not American English style (ex: grey against gray).But I should do opposite, I saw that later. I'll revise them too.

3yr

RJMidnightLv3RJMidnight

I noticed that you used British English for some words, I did not have a problem with them. When I meant unclear wording, I was talking about how some words were in the wrong order. (If you were talking about that part).

KaGen:And additionally, i chose English words when it's optional, not American English style (ex: grey against gray).But I should do opposite, I saw that later. I'll revise them too.

3yr

KaGenAuthorKaGen

I implied both. British style's plus to your explanation. I like all typtypes of feedbacks, thank you my friend 👋

3yr

KaGenAuthorKaGen

And there're some mistakes because of cellphone's auto-complete function like in my last reply 😁

3yr