Review Detail of yokedjaguar in The Last Chance I Could Live!

Item: The Last Chance I Could Live!
Rating: 2.2

Review detail

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It's slow, the story itself is boring, mc has 70 yrs of experience and yet he's a retard, grammar is annoying, comedic side of the story feels more annoying than funny after awhile, systems stupid, it has potential but that's the only good thing about it.

The Last Chance I Could Live!

amarieheath

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amarieheathAuthoramarieheath

Thank you for the review! 🥰 Glad to hear that in my first story with this kind of genre. I'll improve it in the next chapter 🙈 and thank you for your time to read this story, love youu~ 🥰

3yr