Grammar mistakes aside, I think this story is definitely worth your time. Rarely have I been so drawn into a novel that I read the whole thing before I realized it. The Author has a mastery over pacing and exposition, and they make use of this to keep the reader immersed in a way that feels natural. I like the way you use the system, and it reminds me of a few mangas that I've read in my time. I do truly hope that you continue with this amazing work, Author, as I look forward to reading more!
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