Review Detail of cutekittensmeow in Trust Me [BL]

I couldn't make it through the first chapter of this web novel because the writing quality is so bad. Each paragraph is a single run on sentence. I have never seen so many commas in my life. There are nonrestrictive clauses and appositives within each other to the point where it's impossible to know what's actually being described once you get to the end of the 10+ line sentence. The adjectives the writer uses make no sense and very much sound like they were haphazardly picked out of a thesaurus. Even though it was only chapter 1 and it was so difficult to read I could tell there was a good amount of character building and the plot would likely be interesting... But I just couldn't struggle through the horrible writing to enjoy it.