Review Detail of gg_gg_7901 in The World Cataclysm

At first i was afraid of reading due to the reviews saying the grammar is bad and i was extra sad seeing a grammar mistake on the first line of the book and yes there is mistakes but most are unnoticeable and it is not frustrating at all to read. Overall good book, world looks like it has thought put into it. I thought Brian/Fatty was going to be dead weight and annoying/comedic relief at first just due to common tropes but he is not, there was not reason to make him fat.