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Review Detail of YOYO_honey_singh in The Great Novel -Extraordinary Nobleman

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story plot is ok..writing needs improvement (but its ok and understandable)..however :- 1. author has not showed the stats of mc since chapter 24..it has been "several months" in the story as of right now ..but mc gets scared seeing wild adventurers when he goes for knight exam..technically thts not possible - if mc takes even 'one strengthening portion every day', after several months his stats must have gone very high..but mc ran like a scarred little cat..author has not shown stats of mc so we dont know what is going on 2. he only memorized strengthening portion formula and did not go to library in many months since first time..his family is already well of now but he still hasnt mastered anything else like rune or others..with this he is getting scared of wild adventurers in knight exam..what else can mc do..he should have mastered making many portions each day right now but he is only making one i guess (again author is not showing tht part anymore which is bad storyplay)

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The Great Novel -Extraordinary Nobleman

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